Your writing style in this was so unique! I really, really loved it. The run-on sentences were so perfect for this. 10/10. I hope to read more from you! Report Review
Awe, you are so cute! You have a nice style, and by the looks of it, people seem to really like how you write :) I just wanted to stop by and thank you for supporting me, or thanking you if you have supported me, and my writing. Once and a while I look back on old reviews and I like to read/review back to those who took the time out to write to me :) Keep writing!Author's Response: Awh thankyouu, that's really nice of you. I lovelovelove your stories, even though I don't review as much as I should >.< Thanks for reviewing! x Report Review
Wow. I adore how to brought it all together and your writing style, and it was so realistic and sweet. I'm going to break one of my personal rules now by saying the ending was cute, because it was. 10/10, mistress. If only I had more time to continue ranting about this great fic.Author's Response: Awh, thanks lots < 3 I\\\'m really glad you liked it! Thankyou for reviewing :) x Report Review
hey! I would of liked it to of bee written differently, but that could be just me- I just couldn't get into it. There was also a lot of swearing, might want to cut it down a bit. I feel really bad for Harry, I wouldn't be surprise it he did go suicidal after everything he's been through.Author's Response: Yeh, I think it was a bit too choppy. I wanted to capture the kind of disjointed state of mind I think he would have had after everything, but I think I failed :D Sorry about the swearing, I don't really swear in real life, but as soon as I write fanfiction, WHOOSH, lol. If I ever revise it, I'll bear it in mind. Same with the choppiness. Thanks for reviewing! x Report Review
Hey- I really enjoy your writing style, and I think that this is a story worth mention. You really portrayed what went on inside and I enjoyed seeing him get better. Thanks. -DaniAuthor's Response: Awh, thanks alot for the lovely feedback =D Ummm, first reviewer prize... Neville's Mimbulus mimbletonia socks? :P x Report Review
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