its interesting story, easy for reading,and have a lot of potential for development :D
Just one question..do you plan to do all 7 years?Author's Response: Thank you for the review, they always make my day.
And no, I don't.
Well, not in the individual novel sense. Right now I'm working on a few chapters that are explaining/summarizing years 1-3, and I may squeeze year four in chapter three but I don't think I can since that will probably be the most dramatic year for Harry as a Slytherin, since Voldemort is coming back and everything. I am going to try and start of there, with year four, hopefully in chapter five at the latest.
Chapter two is already in queue and I hope you'll stick with me and watch to see if I can get this story to unfold. Report Review
Wow I really like this chapter! Are you going to post anything soon? I really would lile to see your development of this story!Author's Response: I have just started revising this story, and I do plan on restarting writing it. Once I get my laptop fixed and microsoft word running I would love to continue. AS of now, it's on hiatus. However, I am pleased that you liked it and wanna encourage you to take a peek at my other stories! :)_ Report Review
wow! I usually turn away from these Harry is put into Slytherin fics, but for some reason this one has gotten me interested, cannot wait to read more!
But Albus usually said his speech at the end of the feast. But good first chapter, a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes, but I over-looked them and I really enjoyed it!Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I enjoyed writing it.
I know its not really perfect with everything, but I am going to edit it as soon as I finish chapter for, which I am currently in the middle of! :) Report Review
wow! i love your story, it's such a good example of one thing in a story being tweaked, and the entire rest of it being blown away. i especially liked the last paragraph, it's so CREEPY!
-rachelAuthor's Response: thanks! i\\\'m glad yu liked it. :) just wait to see what happens next! Report Review
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