I was looking at he person you picked for Albus Potter and I think I better picture would be Logan Lerman. Just a thought. Great story:)

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I'm sorry. But I just can't give u a 10/10 for that. Maybe a 7. I hate how Nora becomes friends with Scorp. Makes me aggravated. Other then that, I can't stop reading.

Rock on,

Robin

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OMG you have written an amazing story, just double check you spelling and/or maybe get someone to proof read. Im favouriting this and going to read book#2 :)

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didn't finish but DAVID TENNANT! he's brilliant!

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Great story! It'a well thought out, and well written. It's exciting all the way through. I liked the story about Rose and Scorpius best, and I sometimes felt a little bored because it was to much about Nora. But still a great story! Can't wait to read the sequel, especially since you said it's going to be mostly about Rose and Scorpius. I love them!
Keep writhing, it's great!

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wait.. thats the ending? good thing theres a sequel, because otherwise i'd be telling you that that was probably the most unsatisfactory ending ever. this is a really good story, and i love it, but thats a crap ending. you cant just leave the whole rose/scorpius thing dangling like that.. so yeah. thankfully theres a sequel.

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Wonderful, I did enjoy your story, wish Scorpius and Rose would have gotten together but there is the next book. :)

I also like the way you left some cliffhangers for the next story.

Well done.

River

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Vanity is such a pain, we all know Rose should have told someone that day in Hogsmead, but.

Now look at the mess there in :)

I love this story, can't wait to finish it.

River

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Only a couple more chapters to go and a wonderful story it is. Hard Nora finally shows she is just as fragile as fine crystal, Al is the hero, Scorpius is going to end up with Rose as it should be, life is good.

River

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Great story so far, and what would x-mas be without a Molly Sweater.

River

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I loved the first chapter, nice touch with the HP autograph, I think that was what hooked me.

River

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When I saw the A/N of 'Done,' the first words out of my mouth were, "What the fuck?!" Then I kept going and saw you had continued the story and I breathed a sigh of relief. I have a really hard time getting into the *Next Generation* stories, but I really, really enjoyed this one. Sadly it proves to me that no matter how many stories I start, even if they are 50k+ words, they aren't ever just 'right' so I never publish them. Lol. But this one, this one could happen. This one could actually be real. Like I said, I thoroughly enjoyed it and I can't wait to start the sequel, though I may wait til tomorrow since I need to get some sleep soon because I have a horrendously early job. Anyways, congratulations on this masterpiece! ~Krys

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I knew there had to be something else in her past since she can see thestrels, and since she didn't actually see Emily get killed... well, there is still at least one loose thread. Looking forward to finding out what it is. :)

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This is definitely your best chapter thus far. :)

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I'm loving the work - but have a little quibble. A
Canadian that thinks Scotland is cold? Possibly if she was a Vancouverite, but coming from Toronto, it seems a little wrong.

Author's Response: Ya can't be sure. I've only been to Scotland once but when I was up in the highlands it got quite nippy and that was in May, so I'm guessing in the winter its probably freezing. Who knows.

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I love your story. This chapter has some errors so u might want to reread it. Great job so far

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Okay, so here's the thing. I've read through all of this story and I've read through all of "Forbidden Thoughts" (well, all 9 chapters at least) and you still haven't gotten R/S together. I mean, I can only take so many shifting glances, awkward silences, heart palpitations, etc before I start thinking that you're being unnecessarily cruel.
So please, update that one and PLEASE please allow them to have some sort of couple moment that pleases bothersome sods like me. Thanks in advance!

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David Tennet. I don't suppose he's a play on David Tennant, from the (amazing) show Doctor Who? :D

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www(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/s/5586837/1/Evolving_Stakes

I don't know if you posted it on this site or not, but it's up there and it's exactly the same. Thought I'd tell you in case it wasn't you that posted it, so maybe you can contact the site admin and petition to remove it.

You've written a lovely story, and copiers are idiots.

Author's Response: It's mine don't worry. For some reason I made my penname different.

And thank you for the review :)

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Oh Merlin ... ! This was a surprising end to a story. I suppose with the sequel coming we can look forward to the real Rose/Scorpius story to play out now that Nora's story has been told and she's ok. But your Rose doesn't seem naive enough to actually believe that Zabini git! So I'm really looking forward to what's coming and how our Scorp is going to convince Rose that he really does love her and wouldn't leave her no matter what his parents say. We know Zabini means that he's "required" to marry her, right? Well, we'll see, right? :-) Can't wait!

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love all of the drama! cant wait to see what happens!

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great chapter! i never really realised how important the shack was.. hmm... also i loved the part with dave and alice(:

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love it! Scorp really needs to stop with the act and tell Rose that he likes her! I am in love with this story!

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WHO THE BLOODY HELL IS DARIUS!? hahah.. wow.. i love this story!

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ohh that was dramalicious! i love it(: haha! i think Nora and Rose will soon become friends! or at least i hope!

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