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Review #1, by Alexa_The_First Every Story Has A Beginning

24th June 2009:
Interesting chapter. I really like the idea of them being brought together through music and having that as common ground rather than house, I think it could be reviewed as a departure from the previous prejudices.

Just a couple of points to make though. The chapter was a little short but you may have intentionally done that as a prologue. Also 'Scorpios' should be spelt Scorpius instead.

That's all though, as I said before very interesting chapter and the idea is very original.

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