An interesting concept, and the things that are good about this story are VERY good. You have a very nice writing style when it comes to flow and description. It is a little confusing, though that may have been the point? I'll just view it as artistic and interesting. Well done on being original, this is truly nothing like I've ever read before! Report Review
wow that was cool :) Report Review
it's quite confusing that we don't know for sure who's point of view it is at first. and we could use a little more info as to why snape is there in the first place. he's a wizard, shouldn't he be at St Mungo's? just sayin that i think maybe you should look it over. Report Review
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