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Review #1, by Hermione_Crookshanks I Thought I Loved You Then

7th July 2009:
Aw, adorable! I definitely enjoyed it. The only issue I could find was your punctuation during your dialogue at the beginning and some grammatical issues.

For example:

'And I remember you taking 45 minutes to kiss me good night back at the beginning of fourth year.' Hermione told him with her head against his chest staring into the fire.

should be:

'And I remember you taking 45 minutes to kiss me good night back at the beginning of fourth year,' Hermione told him with her head against his chest as she stared into the fire.

When you say "head against his chest staring into the fire" it sound like Harry's chest is staring at the fire. LOL. It's just a case of modifying the incorrect noun. ^_^

But you seemed to have fixed that up later on.

A really, really cute and lovely piece. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, it really made my day. Thanks for the advice too. I'll have to fix that up when I have more time. Thanks for reading!

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Review #2, by Mrs George Weasley I Thought I Loved You Then

8th June 2009:
how cute, it's so preety.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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Review #3, by Susan I Thought I Loved You Then

6th June 2009:
Wow wow wow - are you sure we are related? I can believe someone so talented is related to me! Awesome :-)

Author's Response: Yeah I'm pretty sure were related. And thanks, I really appreciated it. :D

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Review #4, by Rob I Thought I Loved You Then

6th June 2009:
I am so impressed...you did a terrific job. So much more than I expected (because I did not know what to expect). You did a great job on progressing them through life.you have a talent for sure. Thanks for sharing and for who you are.

Author's Response: Thanks! I don't really know what to say I'm just really happy you liked it so much! :)

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Review #5, by kimmypotter I Thought I Loved You Then

5th June 2009:
Awe this was cute!! I can't wait to read more of your stories like this!Great job on this one!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate the review!

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