Aw, it's a good start and seems really cute. I definitely will be keeping an eye out for this. I want to see what you do with it. It's a pretty nifty way to make a cliche more unique. Very nice job. :) I'll be keeping an eye out for updates. Report Review
Wow, I loved it. The start was great, and it sounded like a beginning of a real fairytale (or maybe this is?) I want to see where this is going. Hiding behind a mask like that at all times must be hard. I wonder how Amira's life will turn out. Keep going, please!
(Haha, I had to laugh at the describtion. "she longed for a prince but what she got was Sirius Black.", I would be happy to trade anytime!) Report Review
It's good. I like the whole premise of it, you know. I've always adored fairytales as a child :)
Please do continue.
8/10Author's Response: thanks. i'm glad you like it. i will. Report Review
i love the banner, and good first chapter.
-cocoAuthor's Response: thanks. i love the banner too. stealingeternity was the one who made. Report Review
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