That was GOOD. You are such a talanted writer! It was funny and well thought out and James was JUST the right amount of clueless without being an idiot. Great job!Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I love that story so much...it was one of those that I just had so much fun writing it! I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I did! Thank you and keep reading! Report Review
That was really adorable. Sirius cracked me up, probably more than he should, but that's Padfoot for you.
I liked that this was light and funny. Poor James. Apparently no one taught him the difference between weeds and flowers. Apparently Remus needs to give him a crash course in that.Author's Response: I wanted them to seem like typical teenage boys...some know girls, others just think they do...haha, and I love Sirius...I don't think I could write a story JUST about him, but he's the character I love sticking in there to lighten the mood Report Review
Haha, I laughed at the end. That's such a James thing to do. Very cute story and I love the Marauders interaction. Especially Sirius and his oh so serious jokes. =)Author's Response: Haha, thank you...I got the idea from watching a group of my friends talking...they just sounded so funny that I had to try to imitate their body language and tone of voice...and I couldn't help it...I've seen so many serious jokes, that I had to make Sirius have one in my own story...thanks for reviewing Report Review
Great! Thanks for the laugh.Author's Response: you\\\'re very much welcome! Report Review
haha even good the second time. :]Author's Response: of course! that's because it's so good!
haha, I jk!
thanks for reviewing, chica Report Review
Awww poor James,when will he ever learn?!! but its a very sweet story!!Author's Response: thank you for responding! haha, I like to think of james as hopeless...but he still wins in the end Report Review
It was brilliant!
I wonder what expression had James in the face.Author's Response: haha, I'm sure it was amusing
thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Haha. The very first line had me laughing!
Good one-shot but poor James!Author's Response: haha, I hope it was as fun to read as it was to write! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
i love the ending!
-cocoAuthor's Response: haha, thank you! Report Review
hahaha. I liked it. But what year are they in? its unclear...Author's Response: I think I said fifth year at some point...or I made a hint to it by saying exams or something, but it doesn't really matter, haha. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
The last part was brilliant!! I so wasn't expecting that...lol. Poor James, he was only trying to be nice.
You wrote the Marauders really well. A few silly typos in places, like 'Petey' instead of 'Peter' but nothing serious.
xxAuthor's Response: haha, Sirius was joking when he said 'petey'
but thanks for reviewing! I love writing the Marauders, and I'm glad it appears that way. Report Review
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