yay, so glad I've found this story again! Update soon, can't wait to see some rehearsals! Report Review
Ohmygod, this story is HILARIOUS!!! I adore Lily, she's amazing, and James is really cool, and I think Alice is my favourite character in the entire world! Please please please update soon!! Report Review
:D AMAZING chapter!! i LOVED it!! Report Review
haha!! YAY!! im so happy that lilly has finally admited it!! :D now maybe she will dump her jelous boyfriend!! :D anywho, another AMAZING chapter!! :D Report Review
omg! Sirius is suck a jerk, anyway, another AMAZING chapter! Report Review
omg!! i LOVED it!! haha!! that was AMAZING!! :D Report Review
haha! i LOVED It!! made my day! i LOVE The chapter name!! :D Report Review
haha! Lilly is the best!! ahaha! i love how she handeld that situation!! haha1 anywho, another AMAZING chapteR!! :D Report Review
haha! omg Sirius is the best!! haha! AMAZING chapter!! i LOVED it!! :D Report Review
haha!! i LOVED it!! that made my day!! :D Report Review
Wonderful chapter! I loved how lily wanted james to kiss her! and of course all the great humor. she's a halarious character.
and I was going to email you the banner i made but the email you gave me had a question mark in it (shortiie94? @ aol. com) and i didn't know if the ? was supposed ot be there and i didn't wanna email it to some random person ahha.Author's Response: haha yeahh theres no ? just shortiie94 @ aim. com lol
thank you for the banner and review! Report Review
hahah loved this chapter. Lily and james have such great chemistry, and i loved that she admitted he's a "sexy beast" I hope things work out for marly and sirius, but more importantly lily needs to dump brad and end up with james! (:
can't wait for the next chapterr.Author's Response: :) already submitted! Report Review
Hello! It was my pleasure review all the chapters, aha I how much i love reviews (thanks for reviewing my oneshot btw :D) so I like to review other peoples stories. Another good chapter, poor Marly! Sirius is a complete jerk to her, so if she likes him that cannot be good!
I made a banner for ya, but i couldn't find your email on your author page and its not possible to post links in a review so do you have an email i could email it to? that is if you still want one lol
keep up the good writing!
-Ronsgirl29Author's Response: banner!! ahhh! soo excitedd! umm yes could email it to shortiie94? at aim [dot] com, that is. sorry i'm breaking my email up in the most ridiculous fashion but it won't let me post my email. thankiess :) Report Review
That was really good! I can definatly see your writing improve over these few chapters. I like that James is starting to mature, though i do wonder how Brad is feeling about James suddenly being so keen on lily?
and about a banner, well i'm not that good but if i have some free time i'll give it a try :DAuthor's Response: thank you! i do feel as though my writings improving, but i didn't know if that was just me. lol. and thank you for your note about the banner! i think banners draw more readers in and all...but i just dont know how to make one! but anyways, thanks for the review! Report Review
hahah funny chapter! ahh too vulgar? that's too bad. I bet it was funny though (:
lol having a conversation about the time of the month is rather awkward, but super halarious. I like that Lily and James acutally talked with out fighting! (well almost no fighting!)Author's Response: lol yeah, i mean, i've hung out with mostly boys my whole life, so according to my girl friends i'm a little crude..but i thought it was funny :)
thanks for the review! Report Review
Was i really the first one to mention the chapter titles?! i would have thought many people had complimented them. well whatever, maybe people aren't as cool as me :D ahha
another great chapter. I love how lily gets so angry, its halarious.
10/10Author's Response: thank you for reviewing so many of my chapters!! i really appreciate it! i hope you have stories also! i'm going to stalk your page noww lol Report Review
haha oh black, always making things awkward for Lily. This is really funny! I bet brad won't be too pleased during the kissing scences...!
10/10Author's Response: thank you so much! umm..yeah idk when i'll get the next chap up...but thank you for the review anyway! it means so much you like my plot! :DD Report Review
I like it! And I really love that all your chapter titles are quotes from Romeo and Juliet (:
Very funny too, I can't wait to see how James and Lily being the leads turns out!Author's Response: thank you!! finally someone points out the quotess! (they're so hard to find! lol) but thank you so much for the review! and yes...james and lily as leads has some...interesting resultss. :) Report Review
write more i want to know what would happen nextAuthor's Response: thanks for showing interest! i'll try updating soon but i'm just really jammed with school now :/ Report Review
THIS IS BLOODY HYSTERICAL!Author's Response: :DD dude! SCORE! i love making people laugh! go mee!!
(lol, cocky much? wow.) right but thanks. its good to knoww people like the story Report Review
i love it!
especially the last lines lol.
and the spelling bit with lily...
keep it up, its great :PAuthor's Response: haha thanks! working on the next chap now :) Report Review
Is someone going to open the closet door and see them hugging and think there's more to it??? It'd be good if that happened, would be funny seeing Lily trying to explain her way out of it!!
Anyways, great story - unique idea too!!
Update soon please!!Author's Response: :) thank you! i LOVE when people leave me ideas!! but ironically enough, i thought of that, and deleted it. instead i began the next chap with alice and lily. and since you offered your idea, i'll tell you how the next chao opens:
alice asks lily why she was writing notes to james all class. and why she was in a broom closest with him. lmao. Report Review
Love it! As usual. I'm so glad Lily is coming to her senses. But what about her boyfriend... :/ Please update again soon! : DAuthor's Response: :DD yeppp look outt Report Review
YES JAMES IS FUCKING SEXY!
this chapter made me want him pretty badly. the two of htem are SO cute together. SO cuteAuthor's Response: :DD thanks! i had this whole other chapter written, where like, they were passing notes and like, started joking around and lily said 'so are you calling me ugly?' and my lady found it and read it to the class and then lils got harassed about liking him, and THATS how she decided...but i liked this much better. lol Report Review
so nice. so sweet. fabulous.
UPDATE SOON!Author's Response: :) kk xpect it in october, for real this time. lol. Report Review
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