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Review #1, by Harry and Ginny The World when they were born

2nd June 2009:
not bad 4 the 1st chapter however u wrote the twins being born in one day then the next is when they hear the prophecy and the same day at night the parents are killed. don't take me wrong but i think u should developp the story from their births 'til the parents' death. will u update soon please.^_^


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