Hahaha right before I read this I was like I want to read a story about hem after school. Loved the story, the way she told him was great. I love the way u have capture the character and made them if own!". I look forward to all ur other stories!
MELAuthor's Response: It was fitted perfectly then :P I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Report Review
that is really sweet. james giving up some of his freedom just to give lily peace of mind and to make her happy :)Author's Response: Yes, he is. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Lovely! the emotions portrayed in this...BEAUTIFUL! you have got an amazing writing style..do keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I will :P Report Review
That was so adorable! I completely LOVED it! *Claps and like ten huge cookies* = CharlyAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! Report Review
How incredible. Of course, it would have been a difficult thing, to tell James why he must stay and never leave. This is beautiful. Bravo to you. Bravo.Author's Response: Thank you. I can't even imagine how it must be so really, I just tried. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Beautiful story, so heart warming. You did an incredible job with this. I really liked how young James acted. He was in his early twenties after all I think, it makes sense that one of the most important things to him would still be hanging out with friends. As I said before, wonderful job!Author's Response: Ohh, that you for that review! I'm gla dyou thought James was pictured good enough, it was really what this story was about, him growing up, just a tad. I'm so glad you like it and thanks for the review! Report Review
such a good story :):):)Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
I really liked this story, it was well written and very beautifully told.Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Report Review
Well, that was sweet. I really enjoyed reading it!
This confused me though:
“Give me a valid reason for me not to go out there, risking my life as you say as you say,” is there supposed to be two 'as you say'? Or was that a typo? I didn't know if it was supposed to be that way and I just didn't get it.
Anyway, this was sweet! It was very realistic and an enjoyable read. I had a smile on my face when I finished it!Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out, Collette (it was a mistake). That's so embarrassing! And in the summary too! That's something my beta would have caught :P
Oh, making my readers smile is always so nice to get to know. Thanks for the review! Report Review
It was quite mysterious in the beginning, but it all worked out :). Actually, it doesn't seem to need much betaing (credits to you). I got a little worried at a point. I know you don't go to far away from what the series tells us, but anyway I couldn't help but thinking what had happened to her. You really know how to capture your reader. Good job :)Author's Response: Thank you! Hehe, got a little scared there? :P Thank you very much for the review, Louise! Report Review
Aw! So sweet, VERY origanal! One of the first stories I read that was 1-on-1. 10/10 brilliant job!Author's Response: Love original :P Thank you very much! Report Review
ah so cute. the paragraph of lily telling James she didn't want her baby to grow up without a father made me sad. as always it was very well written and i really loved it. well done!
Dilys :)Author's Response: Oh yeah, I guess that was kind of ironic and sad. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Report Review
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