i read about 70 percent then i had to stop.
i was hoping for a happy ending all the way through,
but couldn't read any more.
good writng though, a few spelling errors, no biggie
the story made me feel horrible. i don't like 'mark'Author's Response: But there is a happy ending..? haha yeah, and I know, I can't spell...=/ Oh...I"m sorry it made you feel horrible =[ Report Review
That. Was. AMAZING! Oh my god, i loved it to death!! I wanted to karate-chop mark into the next century, and then hit him where it hurts. A thousand points for the terrific one shot!Author's Response: thank youu!! you really liked it? =D thanks! =] =] =] =] Report Review
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