Another great chapter!

"For some reason they seem to just spring old and wise from the ground, like they're potatoes." - I loved this line! It made me smile.

8/10.

Author's Response: Thanks again. I loved that line as well. Potatoes just seem so wise.

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Oooh, I really liked that! Great start! I like your OC as well, she seems really promising so far :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I try to keep my characters interesting, so it\\\'s great to know that I\\\'m doing something right.

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hmmm..is her cousin luna lovegood?

great story so far:]]

Author's Response: Yes! You win the cookies. Thanks for the review.

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It's pretty good so far you better actually finish this one. I could have probably figured the inspiration on my own. I mean teenage pregnancy, one friend, dead boyfriend. I luv that book. any who remember that the sooner you update the sooner you get to read my wonderful reviews. lol.

Author's Response: Okay Court. Just for you I will actually finish this one *laughs* but you're gonna have to bug me about it ;)

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Its a really good start I'd like to see where it goes from here, so looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to have the next chapter up for validation by next week, it might take longer though, because I have finals next week.

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