OH MY GOSH!there was definitely a amazing twist at the end I never expected the girl to be LUNA!Great story!I love it! Report Review
BRAVO!!! I loved it! Beautifully written! Not many can pull off a Harry/Luna story without it being totally corny and dumb.But you did so congrats Report Review
omg that was goof!! i was tearing up at the end!! :) cheers and keep writing ::MM:: Report Review
poor harry. Report Review
Wasn't really expecting Luna. Aaaaw, this is so sad! Great job! Report Review
omg i am crying now i love your story Report Review
i luv ur story it is so sad but also very nice. i think harry really should get with luna after reading this Report Review
That was really good! You almost had me to tears (seriously a few more lines and I would have cried). Luna wasn't really who I thought it would be, but you maid it really good. Keep writing, I want to se more of you =) Report Review
whoa! that was really powerful. you have serious talent, and i mean it. luna wasn't at all who i expected! a perfect balance of sadness and mystery, right up until the very last sentence! if i could give you a great number than ten i certainly would, but unfortunately, i cannot. and i you like that kinda remembering about lost love stuff, read my sonfic "I'm Here Without You" its completed, but not that long. thanx so much! rating: 100000000000000000/10 Report Review
Hey! This story is so sad. It nearly made me cry. I´m all depressed now.
It´s written so well and I have to say it is very good.
Have a look at my story if you like to. Report Review
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