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Review #1, by lilypotterfan123 In The Pool

21st May 2010:
a nice little fluffy story there! Description was brilliant and the characts matched up to Jk's version perfectly-especially percy (even though he sort of wasn't there!)
I love your stories as they're really good!!
LpF123 xx

Author's Response: ohmygosh, thank you so much :) you're making me blush. you are too much!


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Review #2, by I_Wish_I_Was_Her In The Pool

4th July 2009:
really short and uneventful... Likethe form and idea though

Author's Response: I wrote In The Pool to save myself from sheer boredom whilst in a hotel in Iowa... so it was a boredom buster haha. I'm glad you like it in any case! thank you for reviewing :)

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Review #3, by IS bookworm In The Pool

15th June 2009:
Ahh! Sweet and short. I really liked it! I'm surprised she told him so quickly but I guess that otherwise they would have gone a long time without him having a clue. Keep writing. :7)

Author's Response: I know it was quick - but it was supposed to seem like while she didn't want to tell him, she really did. Get it out of the way and see what happens sort of thing. A very...Hermione thing to do. :)

I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #4, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans In The Pool

6th June 2009:
awww. this was a sweet one shot. i love how percy is the reason they move.. haa. out af all people. percy. lol and i caraked up at the "fat guy in the weight room" part!
great story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I figured a lot of people would like the 'fat guy in the weight room' part. :) And doesn't it make sense that percy's the reason they move?

Thanks for your review :)

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Review #5, by hannah demma forever In The Pool

6th June 2009:
OMG! that was so cool i hope you continue sorry i'm just commenting now i just found out about this site and i ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! TTYL BYE!

Author's Response: Aw thanks :) I'm glad you decided to say something even though you're new to the site. I remember a time like that very well :)

Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #6, by apAidan In The Pool

4th June 2009:
congrats. a very good glimpse at the two of them.

Harry forcing her to come clean and pretending to misunderstand her hint was very Harry.

Keep up the writing, I plan to start your other story soon, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you.


Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I'm very glad you read my story and plan on reading my other story. It makes me feel very accomplished.

Thanks for the review!

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Review #7, by Timechild In The Pool

4th June 2009:
A cute little fic. I am trying to picture Hermione in a two-piece and, while I am having trouble doing that, it still was totally apropos.

Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

I know, it's hard to imagine very prim-and-proper Hermione wearing a bikini, huh?

Thanks so much for your review!

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Review #8, by kobiet ponura In The Pool

2nd June 2009:
Let's try Prequal!

This is amazing!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks :D

I'll write one when I get the chance!

Thank you for your review! It means a lot.

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Review #9, by i_love_harry_12721 In The Pool

31st May 2009:
awww. so sweet. luv the reflection thing. fat guy was funny. H/Hr forever! =)

Author's Response: I totally agree. I didn't like Hr/R or H/G very much. I almost put a hex on J.K. herself :|

Actually, I dunno. I just like doing things out of the ordinary :)

Thank you for your review :D

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Review #10, by Mrs Malfoy 789 In The Pool

31st May 2009:
"you like the fat guy going into the fitness room??"

rofl, that made me laugh.

nice story :)

Author's Response: Ha, that was a spur of the moment quip I thought of. I laughed when I wrote it, too.

Thank you so much :D

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Review #11, by Chris In The Pool

30th May 2009:
A good first chapter, well done

Author's Response: Aw, well, it was a one-shot...but I'm glad you expect a second chapter :) I'm assuming you want a sequel?

Thank you for your review :)

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Review #12, by AlexavieraJRaven In The Pool

28th May 2009:
nicely written i like it. This isn't usually my thing but i like this thank you for writing it!

Well done and hehe yep Ron's a git!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I could sway your...interests. You're very welcome! Thank you for reading.

Ron is a git. That's why I don't like him ^_^

Thank you much :)

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Review #13, by ParadoxTremors In The Pool

28th May 2009:
That's sooo sweet, it brought a smile to my face. One of the few stories that doesn't have voilence of some sort going on. Really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you :) That's what I tried for.

I appreciate your review!

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Review #14, by Harry and Ginny In The Pool

28th May 2009:
awww they are so sweet. this deserves a sequel!!!^_^


Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Ooh! I like the sound of that...

Thank you so much :)

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