That was really cute!
I am a fan of this song as well as Rose/Scorpius fics, so this was really a pleasant surprise to me :)
Also, your story really matched well with the lyrics. I liked that you interpreted the song slightly different than other persons might have. (for exemple the pebble throwing thing:p)
10/10 for sure!
~Beej

Author's Response: Thank you so much:)
XXXDancingDisaster

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wow i love it so powerful and ya.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing:)
XXXDancingDisaster

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Ooh! I absolutely Loved this story! ~_~

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it really makes my day:)
XXXDancingDisaster

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Author's Response: Thank you for the instructions:) I'm going to request a banner as soon as I have time, I'm really super busy right now...:(
XXXDancingDisaster

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Dear DancingDisaster,
I loved your enchanting Romeo and Juliet story :) It was so sweet and romantic, your words perfectly matching the lyrics. Well done!:)
The way you expressed emotions was captivating, I liked the vocabulary you used. I was surprised when I read English is not your first language, as much as I can judge (my mother tongue is not English, either), your story was rather good grammatically.
And I was glad it had a happy end!!!:)
Thank You for this enjoyable and heart-warming summer reading!:)
Go on writing!:)
Hugs xxx
silvergreen

Author's Response: Thank you for this encouraging review:) It really means a lot to me.
And thanks for saying that you were surprised that English is not my first language *grins*
I like happy endings, so I'm delighted that someone liked this ending, too:)

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oh wow your from finland! cool :)

great english!

i really found your story (well chapter!) amazing!

it was really cute!

i would love your opinion on my new one - nursery rhymes if its not to much trouble?!

Author's Response: Thanks for this lovely review and for praising my english *grins madly*
I would love to give you my opinion on your story. This is just awesome that someone wants my opinion *grins again madly*

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WOW!
Awesome story!
Your English is very good. You spelt fading wrong but that is only a minor mistake.
Well done:)
RAMMiE

Author's Response: Thanks to you too, for revieving and reading my story:)
And I'm going to seek out that mistake and correct it.Thanks for pointing it out to me:)

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This was adorable. :) I really did enjoy it. A few typos you could read through and iron out but goodness knows typos happen ha! Also, if you have a strong cuss word you may want to think about having it be 15+, but since you had the warning it may work out. :P I loved this plot it was great! Now, when other writers who have been here for a while review me, they usually say to make my sentences flow more rather than be choppy. And now I'll give that advice to you. Try to combine sentences together (;s and ,s can be put to great use!) so that the story flows easier. It's hard but it can be done! Great job. :)

P.S. Your English was amazing I would have never guessed it wasn't your first language. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much:)
Especially for the advice you gave me, I really appreciate it.

And now I'm here grinning like an idiot, cause you said my English is amazing. I'm really really happy, cause I have been thinking about writing a novel (I have the plot and the characters ready), but I'm afraid that my English isn't good enough to write it, but now I think I may write it:)

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aww
its so sweet!
I thought of them when i heard the song as well

Author's Response: Thanks for you too for reviewing my story:)
And this song really is like made for them, don´t you think?:D

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Wow, that was nice. I really liked the way you matched the lyrics with the events going on in the fic. It was really emotional, I could feel Rose's love for Scorpius and how they so wanted to love each other freely.

I see a few grammatical errors but its fine with me. It was just a little, anyway. I saw that you were from Finland and I understand.

Nice song fic! Keep up the good work! =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, I like to know what people think about my work:)

And thanks for forgiving my grammatical errors, I really appreciate that :P

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