That was touching, romantic, well writen and something I would re-read a thousand times. It flowed with great harmony, the words were perfect and you did a spectacular job. Report Review
Wowza that was really good, sweet, gentle and caring all at the same time.
I absolutely loved it, 10/10 Report Review
*stands up and claps* WOW! That was Amazing Im speechless if I could I would give you a 20/20 cause it doesnt feel like a 10/10 is enough its so deep and romantic amazing job :). Report Review
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. That actually makes me want to cry. but somehow I can't. I'm way beyond happiness to cry. Ugh... why can't the real book be like this? Why can't people see that Harry and Hermione are perfect for each other? It just doesn't make sense to me... Why would Harry and Ginny fall in love? Why Ron and Hermione? Ron almost got Hermione killed! And Ginny? Where did Ginny come from? She was the little sister for 5 years, and then suddenly Harry falls in love with her? It's just not right...
Harry Author's Response: Haha! I agree, Ginny came from no where in book 6 Report Review
LOVE IT!! Keep up the good work!!Author's Response: thanks so much! Report Review
that was properly epic.
i was half asleep before i started reading this, but now im completely alert. That's either because it's a million words long, or becuase it was truly brilliant.
11/10Author's Response: lol... thank you! Report Review
Niiice read! I suggest broadening your scope to include;
;-)Author's Response: i'll think about it...thanks 4 reading Report Review
Beautiful. Excellently written. Absotutely loved it.Author's Response: thank you so much, glad you liked it! Report Review
if assigning blame were a profitable talent, his creativity in the art could finance the purchase of a small country. -this line is brilliant. i had to stop reading and say that. i continued to read, and i was far from disappointed. truly great writing, and i myself am thinking of penning my thoughts. thank u indeed for the inspiration which slips through our fists as swiftly as water.Author's Response: Glad I inspired you! Report Review
Holy s*** that was amazing. Your incredibly talented, i loved it. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Great story. Loved the unique plot line. It seemed like a great Carpe Dium message. Out of curiosity, were you annoyed at any teachers when you wrote it?Author's Response: actually, no... I liked most of my teachers, but Snape can be such a jerk sometimes, so i went with it... Thanks 4 reading Report Review
very sweet! i just love H/Hr...Author's Response: aww... me too...thanks! :-3 Report Review
Very good story. I think we knew that he would fail the paper, but yet, for what really counts he definitely got an "O". The paper allowed for him to say what he had so much trouble saying to Hermione himself.Author's Response: i agree, we tend to have more confidence saying what needs to be said when we write, and it's always harder just to come out and say it. Report Review
Well done! Truly, it was brilliant. Short, sweet, but was very well written and eloquent. I, for one, am a fan. Nice job, looking forward to more of your work :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! :-) Report Review
This is really good writing. Not what I'm used to, but good nonetheless.Author's Response: thank you so much! :-) Report Review
I have no words to describe the story, even though i do not want to admit it, i cried when harry finished writing the story.., but atleast the end turned out to be a happy one. one of the best works i have read. Simply Beautiful.Author's Response: awww... i'm sorry i made you cry... but at the same time i'm not, Thanks for reading! :-) Report Review
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