Mhmm, that made a shiver run down my spine.
I hope its a story not from her.
But that was absolutely great. L O V E D it Report Review
this is a change
cnt wait to read on
plz post the next part Report Review
that was a bit harsh calling Lily a mudblood- I don't like her for calling her such a thing. If James found out she called her that she would turned to dust.lol.
Not a bad first chapter, very short though but it got me interested. You might want to change the warning of AU- just a suggestion, I know your not wanting it to be au, but from the real story, it is, just an opninion- you do not have to listen to me =]
but nice first chapter. Report Review
Oo I like the beginning already. Although short, which given most prologues are, I think you have done a fantastic job in managing to encapsulate your audience within the first few words. I love your take already and i'm already bouncing up and down waiting for the next chapter, which isn't fair missy, you guys aren't supposed to make me addicted.
Although there isn't much that I can comment on yet, I love your characterisation and your difference in your approach to this story already.
You have a reader in me already.
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