Reading Reviews for Weasley's Wonderful Eye Test.
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Review #1, by Padfooy_15 In need of new glasses, perhaps.

3rd August 2009:

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Review #2, by harrylilyjames In need of new glasses, perhaps.

5th June 2009:
Awe, I love the twins.They were so bloody cute together.
It was a funny one-shot.
I just found a part of it just weird... why would the two of them put their finger on her lips? I was picturing it, and it just was too odd to imagine, probably just one of them and then the other just butt in and start talking away.
When they started escorting her to the Great Hall, you said 'both' in the two sentences that came after one another- might want to take the second 'both' out, just so it runs more smoothly.
I really enjoyed it.

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