You are a horrible story writer? Who in their right mind would want to read this crap? I'd give it 0 out of 10 if i could.

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WHAT THE F***???!!! THAT WOULD COMPLETELY NEVER HAPPEN SO QUICKLY! THEY'VE ONLY BEEN THERE FOR A FEW DAYS!!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOUR MIND?

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Oh my god. That would COMPLETELY NEVER HAPPEN!!! bloody hell...

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That is really just ridiculous. That would never happen so quickly. I mean, really!

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i'll be honest. it was a pretty good chapter until the end bit. It just doesnt feel right for Malfoy to be so nice at the start. Otherwise, good job. XD

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I love it!
Write some more!

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I would keep it as it is, it is really good! Please hurry up with the next chapter!

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i love this story it is awesome but i love that my husband is in it

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Hey

Really enjoyed this - have to know what happens!! please let me know when you update!!

Good luck!


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no!you cant do this to me!!! you have to update!!! pretty please???*makes puppy eyes* lol. but yeah awesome job hunkeep writin. :P

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that was really really really really really really really EXCELLENT!! fif you dont write more right now im goin to... just write the next chapter

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Wow..ok I do not think this chapter is bad at all...I understand it..if you don't like it just merely say its a filler :P WOw.. so Lucius is back eh hmmm...like i said before..my favourite character is on the loose :D Hmm..damn those gryffindoors and there bravery :P lol jokes.. Go you..hopefully there is an update soon, im gunna add this story to my favourites and you to my favourite authors ok so gotta go pp. nice chapter!

-Bradi

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Wow....feelings unleashed eh! Hmm..I am really curious about the next chapter so I am going to jump right into it..nice chapter!

-Bradi

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Wow....design your own wedding dress..hmm..sounds like fun. I wish I could design a wedding dress gods it would be cool bright pink with black diamonds all over hahaha just kiddin lol the traditional white for me please lol:P On to the next chapter :D

-Bradi

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wow...Malfoy Manor....the new OoTP HQ! I have to admit I never guessed that lol! Good luck on your later chapters...and the pages of notes on the characters feelings...and the write read and review circle..haha..i like that..WRR Circle man yuh! lol im hyper don't mind me..on to the next chappie!

-Bradi

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Wow..awsome chapter. 50 chapters??!! Sounds like fun lol well for us readers anyway lol like you said..thats a lot of words :P Hope you had a good easter although that was a while a go lol :P For me anyways because im reading it now..in august...weird..lol jokes. Well on to the next chapter then.

-Bradi

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Wow..I thought she was going to go to like Hagrids or something but she went all the way home...gosh darnit isn't she lucky she can apparate?!?! lol..

-Bradi

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Wow!..so much info in this chappie lol. Hermoine gave up the ring eh wow...that tells how much she loves him though..ya gotta admit lol. So Twinks, how long are you planning on making this story??!! lol..if you feel like chattin if you have msn add me spicyangel82@hotmail.com! On to the next chapter then lol..

-Bradi

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Hey Twinks. Great Chapter..wow..that Irish Coffee sounds good :P Can I have one..do you think Madame Puddifoot would serve me too!?!?! lol. I really like the way your playing there characters it is in some way...unique :D They have your very own little mark on them somehow :P

-Bradi

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Good Good..awosme..hmmm a November wedding..am I invited!?!?! Lol ...I really like this story its well written awsome job and I am like usual on to the next chapter :D

-Bradi

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Hey Twinks lol nice name by the way i like it :P Wow so she trusted him....hmmm..I think I would have too :D I don't know how many chapters it is to become a trusted author but I was wondering that too so if you find out can you tell me it sure would save a lot of time, my stories would be a lot further then they are now lol thats for sure :P

-Bradi

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OMG ..I'm so jealous lol you live in England? Gods I want to move there so bad..:D ok I will stop boring you with my rambling of places I want to live and onto the matter at hand..your chapter/ wow.. lets just say I STILL LOVE YOUR STORY:D lol..kk..so Hermies a pureblood eh well hey it could happen it could happen gods it happens in my story to :D My The Defeated Soul it happens as Hermoine Granger just happens to be Falicity Vixen yada yada yada lol :P Awsome chapter...great place to end it to leaves it in a kind of cliffhanger :D On to the next chapter :P

-Bradi

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Wow..Lucius is out of Jail...tsk..tsk..tsk..wow I'm tsk'ing one of my favourite characters :O lol. I really like the character of Lucius Malfoy and I have no clue why :D Awsome chapter like always lol and the marrige is postponed..hmm...*narrows eyes at author dramaticly* they will be getting married wont they! *Keeps staring until I break down into a fit of giggles apoligizing madly for the death glares sent to twinkletoes* lol. On to the next chapter then..cya in abit :D

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Again I will say it...god I just never change my review do I!..Awsome chapter :D There I said it lol..again..and again but there is just nothing else to explain this story so far..You know I love your story and I just thought that if you want you should read Lady Pndemonium's story The Hawk Approaches..has nothing to do with your story I just felt like telling somebody about it lol..sorry..I'm babbling now :P Its an awsome story too and I'm onto the next chapter of your story..tty in a couple minutes :P aww...you love your reviewers:D I feel so loved :P

-Bradi

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Wow..yup I would sure say that the Draco we all know and love is back to his old stuck up self lol..I guess he learned the defination of the saying 'love hurts'..poor Draco..poor Hermoine! Wow...hey I never knew that Draco was on acid...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol just kidden. Awsome chapter..really brought out the emotional side of them..and on to the next chapter I go!

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