I LOVE IT~!!!
please please RnR mine that would so nice of you!
CandyFLOSSAuthor's Response: hi, you shouldn't really ask for reviews in reviews. That just make you seem like your only reviewing to get reviews yourself and most people are turned off by that. You'd get more people clicking on your name and seeing your story if you leave long and thoughtful reviews on what you thought of their story and why. :) But thanks anyway. Report Review
Now here's the real question. Canon or AU?Author's Response: As of right now it can be either, whatever you want! :D
cheers! Report Review
great opening chapter
overall greatness! :)Author's Response: awe. thank you very much for the great review.lol.
I really like this opening chapter. The hard part about marauder era fanfic is already knowing the tragic outcome. That's why I'm hats off to anyone who can do it well. It's very, very good. Minor typos, though. e.g. began v. begin and do that to me not on me.
Can't wait to read the rest. You've already managed to convey the emotion and the feel as to where the story is going by this very brilliant set-up. You have an excellent feel for words.
Good work. Report Review
I like this! I like the tense that it's in, I usually don't but this time it seemed to work well. Which is good, right? (:
I want to know what was in the letter, but I suppose I have to wait until the next chapter. xD
Very nice start! :D
-JasmineAuthor's Response: The tense, omg! It totally confused me, in the middle of the chapter I start getting confused with the most simple of sentences. lol.
I'll try and update asap.
thanks for reviewing. Report Review
This is brilliant! :D Need more!
Lily's pregnant! : o I think. And what's in the envelope? I need to know!Author's Response: lol. I'll try and update asap. Thanks for reviewing it, it just takes me a while to write because it's in present tense [if I remember correctly] or something like that, that makes it harder to write.
thanks! Report Review
Really good so far! Definitely need more!Author's Response: lol, I'll try and write asap. Just trying to get another story all written and finish. But when I'm done with that one I'll continue with this fic.
Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Thanks for the dedication, I'm flattered. I'll say again what I've said before, this fic is brilliant and you should definitely continue it. My offer to help you out with tenses and spelling still stands, just so you know. You know where to find me if you need help ;)
Best of luck and bravo,
Lily Report Review
awe but why cry? she should be excited Report Review
lol, I love it.
I can just picture the marauders behaving that way, and of course the twists. I'd lay bets on what is in the letter, but that would be jumping to conclusions. Report Review
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