4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Writ' In Silver Chapter one

24th August 2010:
No offense, but English isn't your first language. Is it?

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Review #2, by s Chapter one

8th July 2009:
sweet start i like it i'm writing the title down for later keep going can't wait for you to finish

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Review #3, by a writer Chapter one

21st May 2009:
Don't you use Word or something? Because "this isnt the way to do it joe" use f7 and capital letters for names and the begin of a new sentence. Something else don't repeat yourself in the same sentence

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Review #4, by Skulblaka Chapter one

20th May 2009:
I like the premis of the story so far but the typos are killing you. It needs work but I think it can be a great story.

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