4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Eryn Nightcreatures

7th September 2003:
This is well written, but please cut down on the description! It's a little over the top. Like Weasley - nice touch! Don't forget to make your original character a little more human - make sure she's nicely rounded and people won't flame you for her being a perfect Mary-Sue.

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Review #2, by LeeWeasley Nightcreatures

7th January 2003:
wow!! write more!! THat is getting good!! I hope you can read my stories sometime! I recommend Obsession and Forbidden Feelings!! Write more!! Please!! *LeeWeasley*

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Review #3, by Ari Nightcreatures

19th December 2002:
That is really really really good!! any more? pleease write more! PS thanx 4 reviewing my story (snapes surprise)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #4, by Sivida Nightcreatures

18th December 2002:
this is going to be a really good story if you work on it! give us another chapter soon!

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