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Wow...I love the way you ended it. It feels almost normal that Lily seems like a total stranger to James and the kids, since she spends so much time at work. I just love the story...it's different from what i've read so far and I am looking forward to more. :)
keep up the amazing work, because it really is amzing. :)Author's Response: Aww, wow; thank you!! That seriously made me smile so much! :D
I'm so hyped you enjoy it :D
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This is really good :)
I love the way you created Persephone and Harry as a 7 year old.
I also love James and Sirius, you made them exactly as they are. All in all, I love the story.
Keep up the good work :)Author's Response: Ty so much! That realy means a lot to me, thank you :D
I really try with James and Sirius because i know that you can't have one without the other! :D
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I was just going to ask about Lily. Now I don't have to. But now I have a question for you. Lily is cheating om James isn't she and it's with Snape isn't it. Once you had James talking about how Lily was working alot and about her missing alot of family time and then you pairing. How lomg has it been going on. I'm really hating Evans right now. After all she puts JAmes through so they can be together, she's the one that destroys it by cheating on him and destroying their family.
05/10Author's Response: You're right, and Lily is definitely not a good guy in this story, but there's always more to it than that...
I really like this storyy :]] you should deff. keep going w/ it :DAuthor's Response: Haha, ty very much, i'm glad you like it!
Next one is in the queue and i'm working on number three as we speak :D
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