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Review #1, by Erised

18th July 2012:

Your writing style, plots and general awesomeness has always been one of my absolute favourites on the archives. Reading this and its intense, frenetic start really sets the scene and tone for the rest of the story and is really a joy to read. You managed to create a mini world so quickly and effectively, I felt as if I were right there, standing and watching it all happen.

The dialogue was well placed and sharp, the plot fast but also well-paced, and the setting, though sporadic at times provided just enough detail for the reader to fill in the blanks. Your OC's were again developed just enough to give the reader a taste of what's to come without being an overload of information. A brilliant opening chapter.

If anything I wish there were more setting, but it doesn't detract from the story at all. Great work!

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Review #2, by Hannah

I: Jack Be Nimble

15th December 2009:

Fabulous! I'm loving it very much, so will you please update soon? I can't wait for more!
10/10

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Review #3, by lila

I: Jack Be Nimble

2nd November 2009:

well, this seems like it'll be good. i'm liking it very much so far, and all you have to do is update as soon as you can! ;)
10/10

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Review #4, by thebakerwhowouldntcook

I: Jack Be Nimble

17th May 2009:

Hmm, this is interesting. It really grabbed my attention and held it. Good job, I can't wait to read more :D

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