hi how old are you now???Author's Response: hi, I'm 14 now :) Report Review
Well, I picked this story because my name is, and spelled, Jasmin. Kinda interesting. James a virgin?? huh, well, I'll keep on reading :)
Jasmin :)Author's Response: Thankyou! Report Review
It's OK. You updated however. I was very happy to see it. It was longer and interesting. But I'd like to give you a bit of advise. Read your chapters even once carefully before posting. That would avoid very-easy-to-make spelling mistakes. I just noticed a few. It was a really good chapter though, I enjoyed every part of it. Can't wait to read your fourth chapter. Though no pressure to update very quickly, because I know how busy we can be sometimes. But DO update. OK? Good Luck!!!
Isabel BlackAuthor's Response: THANK YOU!!! I love gettin your reviews, I'll try and update (and a bit more often, I'm not that busy!) thanks for your review. Report Review
Please don't abandon this story! I know your busy but we can wait haha. Really liking this story so far =) PGAuthor's Response: Okay! I'm not going to abandon it, thank you for the awesome review. Report Review
Oh! That was a pretty good chapter, but I was very surprised when it came to the end of the page, I thought it would be longer. Anyways, it was great but a little too short this time. Maybe that's because i want to read more, more & more of this story. CAN'T WAIT!!! PLEASE update soon! You know that I'm waiting!
P.S. - Just wanna tell you that next chapter of my story has been validated, do read it, but no pressure. And by the way, are you interested in making a banner for your story? You can use imagemerger(dot)net and lunapic(dot)com for that.
Isabel BlackAuthor's Response: THANK YOU! Sorry it was short, I was a bit rushed for time. Now I have the time, it'll get longer. Promise! I will update soon, but I have loads to do, and I haven't even started to do it yet so...
P.S.- Of course I'll read your chapter! I'm off to read it now! Thanks for the info on the banner! Report Review
That was a very very good start, I would say! I was really looking forward for this story. This is better than I expected. The way you wrote everyone's point of view. And the background idea's very interesting. I think this is gonna be very good story indeed! Good Luck!
P.S. Thanks for reviewing to my story and please keep reading it. I'm gonna re-write the first two chapters, because you said it was confusing. I'm really sorry for that.Author's Response: Thank you! It's great to know that you like it. I'm going to keep writing everyone's point of view, and it's cool that you like the background idea. Keep reading and reviewing. The next update should be a while, I have just started writing it. And thank you again for taking the time to review.
P.S Of course I'll keep reading your story, I really liked it, and there's no need to be sorry for it being a bit confusing, it was a bit, but I caught on quite quickly, and alot of first and second chapters of stories are like that. Especially if it's your first fanfic (is it?) I know loads of mine are! Report Review
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