continue the story! it was gripping and funny how ROn interupted them! it would be good if you continued this. i rate it 8/10 it would be 10/10 if there was more.

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gripping story and makes you want to carry on reading. really think you should carry on because i would love to read more of it.

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WRITE MORE I BEG OF YOU WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO HARRY AND GINNY

Ron is going to mad!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your all-caps writing sounded like screaming in my head. Awesome.

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AWW. Ron again!! :))

Author's Response: Yep. Some things never change... Thanks so much for reading my story!

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Just a quick note on a spelling mistake, "He placed his hands on her bare back and marveled at how nice her skin felt," It sould be Marvelled! Hope thats what you were looking for!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad that people are telling me this, because otherwise I would never have noticed. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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If you are looking for spelling mistakes I found one in the sentace..."He began as Ginny continued to pull on her clothes. Harry forced himself to stair at the poster. He tried again." It should be Stare, not stairs. Don't know if thats what you were asking for or not but there you go.

Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyou! This is just the type of thing that I was looking for. Thanks so much for letting me know! Oh, and thanks for reading my story too!

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haha!! that was AMAZING!! great job!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! (I feel like I say that to all reviews, but I really mean it!)

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Nice one-shot. Leaves me wanting more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I really don't want to say "thanks so much for reviewing" because I feel like I say that to every review I get, so instead I will leave you with some words of wisdom. The path to victory is paved with cucumbers. Those have been your words of wisdom. Thanks again!

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I don't like to nit pick things or be mean, but it's gwenog jones, not qwenog. (oh, and I said "edited it" out loud and it is really hard!)

Author's Response: Someone already told me about the spelling, and I am SO greatful that you did too. Thank you so much, I still can't believe that I missed that when editing. Saying "Edited it" drives me insane, I'm glad I'm not the only one! Thanks so much for reviewing.

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Good One-Shot. Yes there was one more spelling error. The leader of the Harpies is Gwenog, spelled with a G, not a Q. But I like the way you had them meet, right back to where they were for their last kiss. Thank You!

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you so much! I can't believe that I didn"t catch that! And thanks so much for reviewing!

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Love this :) really cute, nice and fluffy.just the way I like 'em (: but a few spelling mistakes...sorry to be fussy, i'm just one of those annoying people and i can't help pointing it out.

Author's Response: SPELLING MISTAKES? Are you serious? I have to look through it again! (Spelling mistakes are my pet peave). Oh no! Now I'm freaking out!!! I have to go edit. Thanks for letting me know!

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I really liked this story, i would probably say one of my favs, great ending!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Ms/Mr Random person! If your an author, than you know how awesome it feels to get a review like this!

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I just have two thing to comment on...

Ginny is not a tramp!!
and Harry would never do that!!!

Author's Response: Sure he would... He just did.

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haha i loved that, espaically with Ron because didnt he walk in on ginny kissing dean or someone and later ginny kissing Harry i loved it

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OMG!!! RON NO! Hehehheh! So adorable! I loved it! Congrats and write more soon!! *Claps and loads of cookies* -Charly

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll be wanting those loads of cookies:)

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i love the ending. It makes the story!

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Fab story. LOVE THIS. You are an amazing writer. need more!!

Author's Response: thank you sosososososo much!

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WOW! That was hilarious!! The ending (last couple of sentences) made me fall over laughing. Typical Ron!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I love to hear that people laughed at the end, because it means that they have the same sense of humor as me! (And because it means that they liked my story;)) Thanks so much!

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hahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!.
u get it. I laughed for 10 minutes after and during the time i was reading this. you are fantastic. keep it up,mate.

Some things never change. that was...wow.
i gave it this rating bcuz u should have made it longer so i could bask in the hilarity and fantastic (ness) of it! otherwise 9 3/4s

love always, TheVforever

Author's Response: thank you so much! If you ever post, then you knoww how great it feels to get reviews like this! If you don't know... then it feels absolutly fantastic! Thanks!

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haha! ron bursting in - typical!

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i thought that, "Something's never change" was going to refer to the fact that harry and ginny can never stay away from each other, and then...ron, omg i can't stop lauging! amazing!! 10/10

Author's Response: oh, thanks so much! I absolutly love getting reviews like this! Happy upcomeing Hallowe'en!

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this story is a hit not a miss!
good job!!

Author's Response: thanks! this is my favorite story that i've written, and i'm so glad that other people like it too!

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Hah! I've seen many fanfics where Harry comes upon Ginny in the shower and they go into her room, make-up and start snogging, but never has Ron come in to interrupt! Great idea, hilarious, too.

What kind of man are you?? lol. ~writergirl8

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Seriously, you can't wrap up months of waiting and wondering in 600 words!

Author's Response: I just did

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Funny ending. The eternal pest Ronald Weasley to the interruption.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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