I did like it. It was a good length for a first chapter and I'm anxious to read more. At first I thought there was a bit too much of the tedious descriptions for a first chapter but then I realized that it was just right. Good work.Author's Response: Thanks! I like your review style too- it gives me things to look at without making me feel bad about it. Now I just need to get around to doing that next chapter... Report Review
Great start... Very well written. Looking forward to more Elven tales.Author's Response: Thanks. Next chapter coming soon, hopefully. Report Review
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