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Review #1, by The secretest of Santas In The Rain

7th January 2015:

Poor James! I can't help but wonder what the fight was about and how Sirius is going to involve himself :P Because with Sirius he's always involved :P

He's like a little detective! He really wants James and Lily to sort out their fight that he's willing to go outside in the rain and get that perfect hair of his wet! Surely not!! The love for James must be strong! :P

:O HE KISSED HER!!! AHHH! I'M SO JEALOUS... I mean he totally shouldn't be doing that to James.

Awww I'm glad that they got caught up in the fantasy. And once again you write such an adorable and lovely one shot. :D I absolutely love all of your stories so much! They make me feel so happy and wonderful and I'm becoming such a massive fan girl over them!

Author's Response: Yay for Sirius fics!! I love Sirius, too, although I am always so nervous writing any of the Marauder characters. They're just the hardest of people to write about. But they are darling to read.:)

YES. He shouldn't be doing that as well. Hahaha. But, he did! And I think they're both the better for it, maybe? They're not about to ruin James and Lily's relationship but at that moment, I think what happened is something that they both really needed.

Anyway, you are the most beautiful person in the whole world and I love you. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

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Review #2, by wolfgirl17 In The Rain

22nd November 2014:
Hey love,

Here for our review swap. I saw that this one didn't have nearly as many reviews as your other stories, so I figured I'd check it out.

I have to say that while the writing is brilliant, I'm left kind of squirrelly about the idea of Sirius and Lily kissing. Especially while she's dating James. It's probably just my James/Lily shipping mind reacting.

That, and I just can't ever imagine Sirius making a move on Lily. He's just too loyal to James. For all that he's portrayed as a ladies man and a complete rake at times, I think he'd take issue with the idea of himself betraying James that way, and with Lily ever being involved in any kind of romantic activity with anyone other than James.

It's a sweet story though. I love kissing in the rain personally, so you definitely hooked me with that idea. It's just so nice and romantic. =) Not to mention that I adore rainy days. They're my favorite (though this is only due to the fact that I live in Australia where it is sticky and hot pretty much year round. Otherwise I expect I would love snowy days most.)

And now I'm rambling. I think I've been awake too long...

Anyway, I really enjoyed the imagery you captured for this story. I love the idea of the rain and the lake and the pair of them out there in the thick of it, though I'd prefer it being James out there with her. =)

As always, your stories are all brilliant. And have I mentioned your banners? Because I love your banners. I really love the way you make them look as though they are water-colour paintings. I wish I could make banners as well as you. Is your username the same on TDA? Do you have a TDA account? Because I'm so requesting some images from you if you're up for it! =)

Loved it! Keep up the fantastic work. I can't wait to read more of your Snamione!!


Author's Response: Hi, Ellie. :) Sorry for taking AGES to respond to your review. I'm lazy. *hangs head in shame*

First off, thank you for choosing this story. I've always had a soft spot for it even when people were all. UGH, you destroyed James/Lily, how dare you?! And, I know you feel the same way but I think the way I went about it was that scene from Love Actually (if you've watched it) where the best friend was in love with his best friend's wife! I don't think Sirius would ever really destroy James and Lily but that Sirius has a soft spot for Lily and just wants her to be happy.

I'm glad you like the rain. To be fair, the challenge I joined had me write a kissing scene in the rain so I didn't have much to worry about. But, I love writing stories like that. Full of sensory details and descriptors with very little plot. (maybe I shouldn't be a writer of stories but rather, just gleefully describe the most innocuous of everyday items like toilet paper!)

thanks, darling for the swap. always a pleasure


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Review #3, by theRandomSlytherin In The Rain

11th August 2009:
Wow. That was so cute and adorable. I like how descriptive it was.
Oh, and I loved that Sirius was quirky yet sweet.

Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thank you.. I'm finding that writing Sirius might just be fun after all.:) you're a darling!:) ~~Carla

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Review #4, by mbstargirl123 In The Rain

9th July 2009:
Good story!
I really liked the descriptions you provided; the rain really fit the theme and style of it, although I liked how Sirius still had some of his bouncy, quirky-ness, especially in the beginning.
Great writing too! I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors.

Author's Response: you are a darling! :) Thank you.:D I'm glad the way I portrayed Sirius was good to you.:) -huggles- ~~Carla

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Review #5, by phantompoptart In The Rain

19th May 2009:
Oh wow. This was fantastic. I loved it. That was sooo sweet.
I want you to remember that one time, a guy chased after you into the rain. I might not have given you a declaration of love. I doubt that you wanted one. But, at least, remember that I cared enough to do it.
That was my favorite part right there. Sirius is just so sweet in this...I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks. I love a sweet Sirius. I've of a mind to write another one of it.:) ~~Carla

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Review #6, by PottersDaughter95 In The Rain

13th May 2009:
This was the most adorable story I've ever read! I loved it. Normally I critique right now but I have nothing to fix. Keep up the amazing work. =]

Author's Response: Awww.. Thank you.:) My aren't you a darling. :) ~~Carla

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Review #7, by sectumsempress101 In The Rain

11th May 2009:
Awww... It was sweet, and romantic... and definately fluffy. I love the Marauders era and Sirius/Lily, so 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it.:) ~~Carla

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Review #8, by jman7693 In The Rain

7th May 2009:
Aww, this was cute and nice and sweet. Haha, you don't really see many Lily/Sirius shippers on this site(or you do, i have no idea, haha) but i thought this story was completely adorable and wonderful. Your writing style fit this story perfectly and the rain just added to the niceness. Haha, i like this story a lot. :D

You made Sirius actually nice! That was a refreshing change from other Maraurder Stories. He was sensitive for once! Hooray! And i thought it quite believable how the two concoled each other. Lily wasn't insensitive either, like a lot of authors portray her. Like i said, refreshing.

Overall, I loved the story. It was little and sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you. I had lots of fun writing this. :) It was my first Sirius/Lily ever!:) Hahaha.:) And first Marauder story.:) And you... you are sweet.:) ~~Carla

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