Oh my gosh, I love it! I really like how it was sad in the beginning, but it had a funny moment in the middle. You also did a very good job transitioning from a funny moment to a sad one. Wow, I had tears in my eyes reading that! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the fantastic work!! Report Review
I think it's brilliant that you used Arthur in this chapter. He's such an unassuming person that people tend to forget. I've read stories from George's point of view certainly. Molly's as well of course, and Ginny's as the only sister. Arthur's quiet strength makes it easy to overlook him and I'm glad he's had his say. He deserves to have his pain out there as well. Good work. Report Review
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