{reviewid: 2573821, reviewer: 'random%20hpff%20reader'}
19th August 2011:
This story is promising and I REALLY want to know what happens next. Pretty please pick it up again? With a *insert favorite food here* on top?
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{reviewid: 2279760, reviewer: 'phantasmagoria291'}
6th January 2010:
I love this so far, the plot is very unique and his inner conflicts and attitude match his character very well. Update soon?
Author's Response: I try to write as often as I can but I have a great many stories that all beg for my attention like a group of rabid three-year-olds.
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{reviewid: 2229531, reviewer: 'forever_and_a_day'}
3rd October 2009:
Oh dear. The best first muggle experience I must say. XD a crowded train. I loved Draco's letter to his parents; and it expresses his feelings/emotions brilliantly. His interaction with the ticket machine is hilarious and I very much look forward to seeing more of them. I think there should be at least one bit of muggle technology that he is completely in awe of though :P after all, we've got to give our civilization a bit of credit XD Brilliant update and they're getting better and better, I can't wait for the next installment! 10/10
Author's Response: Well, I think draco is still a bit too steeped in his old ways to appriciate Muggle inventions just yet, but there is still a lot more to the story.
And I do give Muggles credit. They invented nachos, after all!
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{reviewid: 2222494, reviewer: 'pinks'}
22nd September 2009:
I'm glad you are still updating this story! You did a great job showing the conflicting emotions Draco was feeling in escaping prison but beginning a scary new life.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I just hope I can write this story fast enough to keep up with the requests for more.
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{reviewid: 2208760, reviewer: 'forever_and_a_day'}
2nd September 2009:
I adore the way you write. The story's coming along brilliantly and I am utterly hooked. Please update soon-ish?!
Author's Response: I shall try-ish!
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{reviewid: 2204856, reviewer: 'pinks'}
26th August 2009:
Great chapter--I liked the description of taking the potion.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you will continue to read and review.
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{reviewid: 2204847, reviewer: 'pinks'}
26th August 2009:
Great first chapter! I am interesting in seeing how Draco copes. One small typo -- you misspelled "docket" as "docate".
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the error. I will be sure to change it.
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{reviewid: 2136706, reviewer: 'forever_and_a_day'}
8th June 2009:
brilliantly written and very intriguing. I am very much looking forward to more!!!
Author's Response: I hope you will continue to read!
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{reviewid: 2136704, reviewer: 'forever_and_a_day'}
8th June 2009:
oh. I'm interested!!! wonderfully written too might I add!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2129834, reviewer: 'jamesiee'}
31st May 2009:
well. i'm ready for more. hahaha, this looks really good. i am actually quite excited for an update. i'll be watching and waiting and waiting and watching!!!
cheers.
Author's Response: I hope you will continue to watch.
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