Wow, that was great. Its really sad but its really amazing. Its kinda horrible the way she found out that her marriage failed and then she lost her husband. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad I could bring out that kind of emotion. I wanted to just give her a really big shock. I really appreciate the review. Report Review
This was really well written, and tragically depressing. A continuation would be nice, but it's also great as it is. Terrific job! :)Author's Response: I'm almost done with the sequel actually. I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you for the review! =] Report Review
Oh wow. Wow, is the perfect word for this. It was a amazing. Seriously. You are a wonderful writer. You really made me feel for Hermione. You could change this into a novel if you wanted to. Maybe put it into Aubrey's prespective? That would most likely be a fantastic story. ;D
Please, please, please continue with this story in some form!! If not then, I'll just love this story anyway!Author's Response: That's a great idea for doing it in Aubrey's perspective.
I was thinking of maybe doing a sequel. I'll definitely let you know if I get something finished. =]
I'm so thrilled you loved the story!
Thank you so much for the wonderful review! Report Review
Wow! That was an unexpected ending! Quite depressing too. I think you managed to capture the feeling of guilt and concern for her daughter's future really well.
likeclockworkAuthor's Response: Haha I'm glad the ending was unexpected. I planned it from the beginning. Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
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