I thoroughly enjoy this story very detailed and descriptive. Please keep up the good work.

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I love this story and do you know what. . I would love to red more of it so I can't wait fore the next one
Love Alex

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I will try to write as fast as I can.
Thanks Vic :)

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wow I really like this story pls write more

Author's Response: haha thanks soo much... I unfortunately won't be updating for a little bit, I've just started senior school and I'm kind of buried in homework at the moment. I promise to write some more when school breaks up for the term.
thanks again
Vic :)

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Heyaa! I just want to say that I really like your story! I think the traveler business iS very cool and somehow you make it all plausible, unlike some other stories where harry has a sister! Please keep writing!
XXX Carlijn

Author's Response: Thank you A LOT. Yeah, I hate when the whole sister thing isn't up to scratch on some stories. I'm trying not to interfere with the main plots too much in this.
Next chapter will be up as soon as possible.
:) Vic

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wow i love it, please update soon you need to update seriously, i need yto read more, this is amazing
the only thing i can see that is wrong with your piece of writing is a few punctuation errors but apart from that great, i'm definitley favouriting this

Author's Response: Thank you, I know with the errors, when writing this chapter I wasn't using a very good computer keyboard, but it's ok I have a new one!
I will update as soon as possible. But don't rush me, I'm coming up to exam time at my school.
Thank you for reviewing.
:) Vic

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I thought it was very well written, and no major misspellings or grammer issues. The idea/plot is intriguing. The only thing I would say otherwise (which is purely my opinion), is that it ran a little too fast to get a good first impression of the main original character. Other than that, Great! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for your ideas and opinions. Throughout the next couple of chapters we will get to know Justine a bit more.
Thank you for reviewing.
:) Vic

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