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Review #1, by FriendofMolly Home at Last

14th May 2009:
That was as deep and fascinating as any chapter here, I've read. From beginning to end, you've really nailed the challenges of the time after the war. Now how soon will Molly and Hermione get on the boys about getting their apparition licenses? I do love the letter Harry sent up to George. Instead of being down on himself, because of all the deaths, Harry's recognizing Life must go on. It will be better with a laugh than a sob. I do like your story, and am anxious to read more.

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Review #2, by lyricalxlies Home at Last

12th May 2009:
WOW! I loved it please write more =D

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Review #3, by Harry and Ginny Home at Last

12th May 2009:
This chapter is great. Earlier i was reading again the 1st chapter and the same day the 2nd chapter arrives. keep up the good work.
what's going to happen to Harry and Ginny? And Ron and Hermione? will they talk about their relationships? what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Review #4, by Harry and Ginny The Dawning of a New Day

3rd May 2009:
Great start 4 the 1st chapter. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Review #5, by Sarcastic_Bones The Dawning of a New Day

3rd May 2009:
A really good start. =] It's got loads of potential and I really like where it's going.
Can't wait for the next chapters. xx

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Review #6, by FriendofMolly The Dawning of a New Day

3rd May 2009:
I must say this was a great start, to my favorite genre, AtB's. There were parts that surprised me. You didn't explain who all were present at the Trios's explanation. You also missed the RoR and fiendfyre part, while destroying the Diadem. It also surprised me that Ginny didn't say yes to getting back with Harry immediately. That said, I do like your effort, and intend to save this and watch for update. Bravo!

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