Rin, this is another beautiful one-shot by you.
I simply love it. As always, I love your work. I felt so sad for Teddy when Victoire told him that she could no longer be together. :( And her having a baby? That's wonderful! I could totally see Teddy as a father. He would take extra care of it and give it the love and attention it needs.
This was another emotional piece of art, that made me want to jump right in and hug Teddy. Why do you do that to me, Rin? Why? :P Aha.
Brilliant work, dear. As always.
xxAuthor's Response: GAH, Alicia. You're wonderful. You really are. I had a close friend of mine tell me that this needed some re-working recently, so I was going to go back and do that tomorrow or the next day. I was feeling pretty insecure about it, and then BAM! Review by Alicia! Thank you so much for your encouragement and feedback. I appreciate it more than I can express. Report Review
I don't know what to say...that has to be my favourite story of yours so far. I'm tearing up. I want to scream at Victoire and tell her how much she's hurt Ted. The whole story I was just thinking 'please don't leave please don't leave...' I feel studip getting emotional at stories when they're...well stories. Beautifully written. I've said that in my last few reviews but i have no other way of describing your work. can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Wow, I as an author am not particularly fond of this one, but I'm very glad to hear that you liked it. Thanks so much for your feedback! I very much appreciate it. Report Review
That's terrible! I can't believe she's making him stay away from his child. That was an awful thing to do. Beautifully written, 10.10! ~writergirl8Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate all of your lovely feedback. Report Review
Very nice Rinnie ; )
Why isn't this called constant, though, I thought it was for a challenge?
Anyway, the descriptions in here are all very good, except in that last bit, where Ted actually falls on the floor... I mean... I get what your trying to make us picture, but it's a bit overdramatic and sort of silly, which I don't think is what you want.
Other than that, this is really sweet.
Can I make you a banner for it??
CheersAuthor's Response: Sorry Soph, I already have a banner being made over at TDA, but thanks for the offer. And I'm sorry you don't like his reaction. I may go back and change that later. Thanks for the review. :) Report Review
I'm going to start by saying what a wonderful job you've done, for just whipping this up. It was amazing. You portrayed Ted in such a light that I've never seen before. You put thought into every detail, every emotion, the way the ring affected him. I feel his pain. I know how to feels to love someone so deeply, yet they don't seem to love you back or care. It hurts and feels like someone's plunged a knife in your heart. I loved this one shot for every emotion portrayed. It was beautifully done. You should be proud of yourself for this. :)Author's Response: Wow, thank you so, so much. I'm speechless! I really just whipped this up one morning on a whim, and didn't put a whole lot of thought into it. Still, I'm very, very glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for the absolutely lovely review!! Report Review
this story is so sweet yet so sad! i can't believe victoria! so bloody irritating. hehe!Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much. I know, Victoire kind of annoys me here too. ;) Thanks so much for the lovely review! Report Review
That was really quite a good one shot- I like the style you wrote it in, no summary beforehand of the last several years- just what is. We know he loved her, and that's enough. It's creative, vivid too. So all in all, I thought it was awesome. 10.Author's Response: Oh gosh, thanks so much. That means so much to me. I just kind of wrote this on a whim, so I didn't really think up a summary or anything. ;) Thanks so much, again, for the lovely review.
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