"Man of La Macha" has always been one of my favorite musicals. I think it was just interesting that you chose this particular song to write a song-fic with. I think it would've been more effective with a simple quote from the song at the top. There wasn't much of a plot with this piece, which was disappointing, because I can tell that you're a good writer. Your descriptions are beautiful and detailed, painting a very nice image, but there just isn't enough of a story propelling it forward. The song is a great and inspiring one, though! And I never thought of it applied to Harry. :)Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I definitely would have preferred to have a simple quote, however the 'challenge' was to incorporate the entire song. I'm glad you enjoy my writing, I'm overly critical of myself, so it's nice to hear something positive. Thanks once again for your review! It made my evening :] Report Review
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