:O YOU UPDATED??? YAYAYAYAYAYAY! Another AMAZING chapter!! You should also know, this story is what motivated me to get a HPFF account... :)
Much love, and UPDATE SOON !
-Gemma Bell. Report Review
I was so pleased to see this story and its hilarious reading about the further adventures of Kenna and Oliver - she is even more insane than normal when pregnant. Smith is definitely amusing, but it would be nice to see more of the old Quidditch team, whenever there's time. Great story and I can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Report Review
I absolutley love this story and of course Flavor of the Month, and I was planning on leaving an awesome long review on my opinons and stuff (and I'd actually be signed in to HPFF) but before I do, I have to say that my name is Cassidy, and I believe giving slags the name Cassidy in stories has become a tragic epidemic. This is like the 12th story where a dumb blonde has been named Cassidy, and quite frankly it baffles me. I eat my vegetables, I get good grades..It's tragic, just simply tragic.
Just wanted to voice my observation; you rock, ect, ect. (Did I mention this is EXACTLY the kind of story I was looking to find and I just very well bloody love it? Well I do. I'd better go finish reading this chapter. I hope you win a lifetime supply of your favorite food. I shall review you again soon! Logged in too, I swear on it!) Report Review
Helllo! So, I read 'Flavor of the month' last winter, and quickly moved onto this story. That was a year ago. Today I honestly thought, 'hey, I should check and see if there are any updates to 'Oh, Ollie!''And well colour me spotted, there was! This is such an amazingly hilarious story, I don't even mind the year long wait for a chapter! Please keep it up, you had me in stitches!
-Emily Report Review
ahh. i love this story. poor ollie and kenna. that babysitting experience was pretty awful. Report Review
I like smiths ideas on the whole sexual orientation thing. 9/10 : ) Report Review
Smith is gay? Thats great!! 9/10 : ) Report Review
This is great. I love it. 9/10 : ) Report Review
That was cute at the end when kenna had calmed down 9/10 : ) Report Review
HELLO :D long time, no see :)
I really enjoyed this chapter, oh Kenna is always mental, add Smith and its no a shocker poor ol' Oli is having an 'interesting' time coping with all of this...
My bet is still on a beautifully colourful baby name :)
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It was cute that smith is over protective of keena 9/10 : ) Report Review
I think the twins will be a boy ang a girl. You could name the boy oj-oliver junior 9/10 : ) Report Review
Poor smith has no privacy 9/10 : ) Report Review
Wow that seeker is horrible 9/10 : ) Report Review
Ollie is going to have so much fun when kennas hormones kick in 9/10 : ) Report Review
Haha i love that angela is ollies boss 9/10 : ) Report Review
This story is going to be epic!! 9/10 : ) Report Review
OMG. GREAT CHAPTER!!! HOWEVER.
I. NEED. THE. NEXT. CHAPTER. NOW. Report Review
Hello! :) I've just read Flavor of the month and Oh Ollie! in one day and I am exhausted and I've got a feeling that my eyes will explode in any moment :D But. I really love your work! Kenna is a great character, I like that she's still the same from beggining. And as a girl, I just love Oliver.
And even though this story seems abandoned, I just wanted you to know how amazing you and your writing are! :)
And I if you update again... well, I am going to pass out from happiness! :D
By the way, I can't believe he's gay! He was drooling over Riley!! Didn't see that coming... but that's probably a good thing :) Report Review
Holy Moley. Was not expecting that. But Fantastic! Haven't been on hpff for a while sooo haven't been able to review all your lurvely chapters:( but I think that you have one of the most devious minds on the internet. Kenna and Ollie are so perfect it's ridiculous. And Smith- awww. Looking forward to the next installment.
Bec Report Review
OMFG! He's GAY?! =O Wow. THAT shocked me. wow. But. What if he said that jsut to get Mia off his back??? Liek he wouldn't go for the whole "sex with who you want" thing if he was right?? RIGHT?!?! PLEASE TELL ME SMKITH ISNT GAY!
-Haylenie Report Review
if she's over 3 months pregnant with twins, she wouldn't be just barely showing. but other than that, it's great. keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback.
Yeah, I know - everybody in my life is pregnant right now, so I'm surrounded by baby bumps! They are pretty hard to miss, I'll admit.
However, I've made references in both FotM and OO to Kenna's physical characteristics. When not pregnant, she's quite thin. That much I'm certain I've explicitly stated. I may not have gone into detail, for which I apologize. She's within five or so pounds of being "unhealthy" and weighing too little, just because she's naturally small-framed and very active. And as she's thin, there's a lot of weight she could gain before being "obviously" pregnant, if that makes sense.
That's not to say she's not showing - she most certainly is. But Ollie isn't the most observant person on the planet, and he's certainly not the only person Kenna interacts with.
As a shameless plug, I will say that there are some differing POV's coming up soon, and a less-biased (and WRONG) picture of things will come with it. So. There you have it.
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I'm so glad that you are back!
I have just spent the last two days re-reading Flavour of the Month and Oh, Ollie for possibly the third time!
You're a fantastic author and I really appreciate you sticking it out.
xx Report Review
this is my first review, and while i really liked the chapter, that's not what i wanted to talk about.
I just wanted to say thank you for posting this. :) Report Review
Oh darling, it was worth the wait! I love the bickering, Oliver's internal monologue and Kenna's own particular brand of crazy.
And the end! o/
SO. MUCH. LOVE!
Hopefully it's not just Smith trying to get rid of the girl, because I love the introduction of well rounded gay characters into a mostly het universe.
Anyway, this was brilliant!
Good luck with uni :) Report Review
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