6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 1: Mad American Women

1st June 2009:
haaa. loved the fight scene. lol so did he kiss lelia!!?!??!? i hope so... as for the crazy american girls, im intrested why he is in america. lol dosnt he go to hogwartsS?
love the story!
update asap :)

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Review #2, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Prologue

17th May 2009:
aww :) love it so far :) updatttee it pleaseee :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much =]

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Review #3, by ImogenPotter Prologue

16th May 2009:
Aww, that was sweet. Will you be continuing?

Author's Response: It's hard to make a unique story of the Romantic genre.
I'm thinking about changing the entire story.
Either way, i'm confident you'll like it.
I'll update soon =]


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Review #4, by Lily Potter2 Prologue

3rd May 2009:
Great first chapter, I adored the ending! There are a few typos in there so you might want to read through it. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I wasn't really sure how to end i'm relieved that you like it! I'll be sure to update soon.


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Review #5, by JKRowlingFan22 Prologue

3rd May 2009:
I love the beginning, it caught my attention right away! Keep on writing! I would love to hear what happens next! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
JKRowlingFan22

Author's Response: I'll try my best! =) thanks for the review!

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Review #6, by hpfan77 Prologue

2nd May 2009:
this is a nice story so far; i liked the small yet effective descriptions you gave of the characters. The leila/al moment with the holding of the hands was cute as well! :) hehe.

anyways, i'm really surprised i'm the first one to review this FANTABULOUS story!! lol...really, though, it's amazing! nice comparison with sapphires to her eyes and such; very descriptive.

also, i loved how you portray Rose--bit like her mum, if you ask me! ;)

again, great job on this chapter--i really, sincerely hope you continue to write this story because it's wonderful so far! :)

you're a great writer!! keep it up!!! :D

rating: ONE GAZILLION OUT OF 10!!! :) hahah

Author's Response: I got validated at the wrong time, i guess.
But thank you very much for the review!
I've been really itching to write this story for some time now, and i glad you like it. =]


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