this is one of the most beautiful pieces of writing i have ever read. your style is so honest and if every person in the world could write like you, I would never stop reading. i honestly can not find anything to criticize! everything was incredible; the brutality and violence of the war, Snape and Draco's relationship, your characterization of both Harry and Draco was perfect, and i especially loved the part with the Mirror of Erised. absolutely amazing.Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's not often that I get so many compliments in a single review. Well, I worked really hard on it, and I'm glad that you like it. I personally love the Mirror of Erised part too, one of my favorite scenes.
Thanks for reading!
-Jessi Report Review
My eyes are burning with tears.Author's Response: Aw. *hands Duckling a tissue*
I hope they're the good kind of sad tears, like when you watch Titannic and the Notebook.
Thank you very much for reading!
--Jessi Report Review
Oh, I just adore this. You know I do (at least, I hope you do :P) It's just brilliant, and even better with the changes that you've made. I especially loved the extended ending.
I just can't tell you how much I love your Draco. He's disturbed and twisted and kinda scary, but still strangely endearing. He's the sort of character I want things to turn out okay for, even though I know they can't.
Anyway, the whole thing was just amazing. Absolutely 10/10Author's Response: Wow, I've barely had it published for an hour and here you are already! Thanks for reviewing, you've really been too good to me. I'm glad you liked the extended ending, I was a bit worried about the last line, but I liked the idea of connecting it back to the very beginning of the fic.
I'll owl you soon with my next story, it's going to be a next-gen I hope!
Thanks again for reading!
--JesPr Report Review
This is so well-written. It's brilliant.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I've been working on it forever, as my beta (above) knows, and I'm glad to see it's all paid off.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-JesPr Report Review
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