Reading Reviews for Clouded Moon
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Review #1, by IloveNeville Memories

4th June 2009:
This was a great chapter. Short, which is good because I've got to be getting to school any minute :S

I really liked Andrea's story. To me, Matthew doesn't seem worth it. But, you never know. For her, he might be perfect.

So, Sophie ISN'T going to distance herself? Oh please don't Sophie, pleeease. Anyway, I'm going to be late so I'd better skadaddle. Great chapter and I can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. And don't worry, Sophie and Teddy will remain friends, not being near him might kill her. lol.

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Review #2, by IloveNeville Changes

27th May 2009:
Very very good :) I liked this chapter alot and I liked how you managed to cover like three years by showing only what you needed to. On the last entry, I think you made a mistake though. It say Sixth Year, November 3rd. Ravenclaw Tower. But it wasn't set in Ravenclaw Tower. Poor Sophie, I can feel her pain. But, it was two years ago, I don't think she can really be saying 'how can he do this to me?'. Or maybe I just don't know all the details. But, I'm very excited to read more and learn more about these awesome characters you've created.

Author's Response: oops, sorry it was originally going to be set in Ravenclaw Tower and Sophie's friends brake the new to her. I'll have to fix that. And thanks for your input. I think that she is asking "How could he do this to me?" because in her heart she really feels that he loves her as much as she loves him (aka A LOT)

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Review #3, by IloveNeville Sorting

11th May 2009:
Awesome chapter! I really really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: thanks so much

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Review #4, by Alyssa The Hogwarts Express

3rd May 2009:
yes the only reason im doing this is to make ur ego bigger. LMFAO

Author's Response: Lissa!!!Or should I say "Oh Grammar Queen."

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Review #5, by SenTfRoMAboVe The Hogwarts Express

29th April 2009:
love the story!

please write more!!

Author's Response: I did, but i have to wait for the Validation, ugh

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