Very very very awesome. The idea of Bellatrix using Sirius to get to Dumbledore is remarkably creative and I like how it's playing out. More please. Report Review
Oh goodness I just realized towards the end it was Bellatrix and now I feel stupid. But job well done, it was very good! Report Review
Oh this is great. I can't wait to see what happens next and I can't get enough of REMUS Report Review
I love it! Also I LOVE LOVE LOVE Remus and I love how you did his character. It's a great idea, the Marauders finding the pensieve. I can't wait to read more- I will right away. Report Review
This was a really good chapter. A lot of action ad secrets. It's great. Is Remus basically the main character? Because that's what it seems like. And I like the ending paragraph. It's a good foreshadowing paragraph. It makes me really want to know what's gonna happen next. Great chapter. And I love Dobby. He's my favorite house elf! :) Report Review
This is a great start to a story. I always thought that Remus would be the one to create the Map. Sirius doesn't seem that smart, but I still love him. Report Review
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