Gosh, I must admit that I cried a little in the end. The story was so beautiful and yet so full of sorrow. Quite accurate description of the mixed feelings of guilt and pain one feels when betraying and being betrayed throughout the whole story, in my opinion. And the structure of the story was well thought (well, what with the kids and stuff...).
I just wish the paragraph of Hermione running to Draco on the platform would have happened. They do not deserve their hollow lives apart from each other.
The whole story 10/10 and absolutely one of my all time favourites. Thank you, I'm definitely glad I spent my day reading this instead of writing an essay, due in two hours ;)
Love, littleberry Report Review
hey there! i read the entire fic and loved it! it was awesome. though i didn't like the ending, i wanted draco and hermione to get together :(
but anyway great story!!
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NOOO!!! They should've been together :( Or at least had one more meeting... hmmm
You are so so so awesome! I loved this! Kinda sad it had t end... Thanks for writing this! :D Report Review
I honestly feel bad for Asteria... she semms to be the only character who hasn't done anything wrong- she just doesn't deserve it Report Review
Hermione was wrong for doing that to Asteria, but I understand how she feels. So many different people coming from so many different perspectives... Report Review
When I saw the name of this chapter, I thought that Draco was going to kill Ron... yeeaahh Report Review
Woah. Random emotional kiss. Awesome :) Report Review
Blaise is pretty awesome. He's all calm, cool, and collected. I love Slytherins :) Report Review
Wow, what a confusing life to lead... If I was in Hermione's position I would have to kill myself. I know it's a terrible thing to say, but really. :P Report Review
Wow you are truly amzing :)
You mentioned in the text that the Notts, Zabinis, Greengrasses, and Malfoy's were the only purebloods that avoided Askaban... Does this mean that the Parkisons weren't so lucky?
:) Report Review
I kind of feel bad for Hermione, but at the same time she scares me... :P Your an awesome writer :D ON TO CHAPTER 2! Report Review
I loved this story!!! I can't stop reading and re-reading! I think a sequel is in order!
Great job!!! Report Review
shouldn't rose and scorpius have greeted each other? they were friends in the nursery school so they do know each other. did ron not realize that they were friends?
anyways this is a fantastic story!! :) Report Review
Oh. My. God. I have a brand new love for Tom Felton. I wish they would have ended up together by the end of this story, but before reading this, I was the most anti-Hermione/Draco person you will ever meet! This was very well written! I could see something along these lines being published in a book, with maybe a little more development on the death eater perspective (if it thrived seperate of hp). I'm kind of going to miss reading this story! I'm kind of wishing that Hermione wasn't such an idiot and that she went to Draco. Stupid Hermione. Report Review
What?! Nothing happened with Draco and Hermione is that a joke? Report Review
Love your story, Draco seems really hot in it Report Review
WOW. It's all I can say. WOW. :D Report Review
Oooh la la. Amazing first chapter. Got me hooked! Report Review
:D this was a really good story. I don't normally like the idea of Dramione but lately i've been warming to the idea. But errrm i think you did really well with the story and the characters well done :) Report Review
Amazing. Already onto reading the next chapter. :) Report Review
Wow. After coming back to this site after about two years, this was the first longer story that caught my eye (you were one of my old favorites and I wandered over here to see if you had anything newer). Now, strictly speaking I am not a Dramione fan. But if written well, I can be convinced. And boy oh boy, did you have me convinced.
I loved every minute of this. Forbidden love is always a topic that draws me in. And this had so much of that. Hermione's emotions were incredibly believable and I was able to relate (to an extent). The unbearable guilt was understandable. I'm not sure that she was perfectly in character one hundred percent of the time, but that isn't really important in a story like this.
I'm sure there are plenty of nitpicky things that I could ramble on about: grammar issues, typos, small typos...but this story touched me so much, especially at the end (that LAST LINE.) that I don't even care. The technicalities matter little to me when I really love something. Bravo to you. You are a very good writer, you have a very fluid style that is both enjoyable and easy to read. This pairing suits you well, also.
One thing that seemed a little out of the blue for me was Ron's personality at times. One minute, he would seemingly be fine, then he was freaking out about what he'd done to hurt their marriage. Previous to that, it seemed that he was completely oblivious to any unhappiness. I would have liked to see more of Ron and Hermione's marriage, seen what exactly is making Hermione happy, seen a little more of their private life...if they're still intimate, if he's still happy.
But it doesn't really matter. For the most part, this story hit all the right notes for me. Marvelous. I'm just glad that I finished it...maybe now I can finally get some sleep, or go to work without dreading it because I want to know what's going to happen! Anyway...excellent story. What really drew me in was the "sequel" you had to it...the one shot, the name of which escapes me. As soon as I finished that, I knew that I had to read this one. Anyway, enough with my rambling. I loved it...if you couldn't tell. Report Review
Draco's wife name is spelled Astoria. Other then that good :D Report Review
I love love loved it! Especially how you mixed your story with the epilogue of Deathly Hallows! Excellent. This is going to my favorites ^_^. Report Review
Wow! This story was truly enthralling: I could not stop reading it.
Even though Hermione was being absolutely awful throughout the story, i still felt sorry for her: She'd obviously made the wrong decision in marrying Ron and even 8 years after the affair, she still longed for Draco. The way you described Hugo in the last chapter was perfect, and the last two sentences ended the story very well.
I did feel, however, that the ending came a little quickly, and that Ron should've found out about the affair, or Draco and Hermione should've had a tearful goodbye to really wrap it all up.
Over all, this is one of the most well written stories I've ever read, and I enjoyed every minute of it. Definitely a 10/10 Report Review
Your right this story is definitely not a fluff, and the moral of the story usual turns me completely off, but for some reason I kept reading, you have a talent that is one thing for sure... I can't overly say I loved it but I can say that it was very well written and was a very intriguing read. Report Review
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