you are awsome I mean it's only the first chapter and I am loving it!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
I LOVED IT! I'm adding it to my favorites. Please update as soon as possible!Author's Response: :D Thanks! I'll do the best I can--I think I've had a flash of inspiration. Haha. Report Review
Hmm. I am suprised at how many times I ended up smiling. You seem to have a gift for making the characters unbelieveably life like. This is the first chapter, and already, I am attached!Author's Response: Wow...thank you so much! That's better than I could have hoped for. :) Report Review
This is wondefully written, and I absolutely adore your definition of poetic justice. :]Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! Hope it keeps living up to your expectations. :D Report Review
Hahaha! That was hilarious! I can't wait to read the rest!Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Hope you enjoy chapter 2. :) Report Review
:D I love this!! Your characters are the best thing, each have their own voice and mesh together perfectly! Especially your main character- she's perfect!
Loving this so far, although you could use some more setting-description and the timelines are a bit confusing.
9/10!!Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! ...Yeah, I figured the timelines were, and hopefully soon I'll get to the part where it all just follows a normal course instead of jumping all over the place.
I'm really glad you're enjying it. :) Report Review
i like Grayson already!
cant wait for the update :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! Haha, yeah, I've barely even starting getting into Gray's character, and I'm a little in love with him myself. :) Report Review
I am in love with your story! You have a great writing style, I really feel like we're in your character's head; it makes it easy to relate to. One thing: I got a little confused in the segue from breakfast to after the quidditch match. It happened really fast and I wasn't sure if she were thinking of something in the past or if it had fast-forwarded. I don't know how you'd break up that paragraph because I like the flow of the sentences, and I don't mean to be nitpicky, but that was something I needed to reread. I really think this story has great potential, and I can't wait to see where it goes! Love it!Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I completely understand how that bit was confusing, but I wasn't exactly sure how to fix it. Glad you could figure it out, though. :)
Thanks so much for reviewing. Report Review
:D This is brilliant! Please continue with this, I want to know what happens!Author's Response: Thank you so much! The first real chapter's over halfway done, and I hope to get it into the queue by the start of next week. :) Report Review
Awesome chapter! i cnt wait for the next one :)Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm writing it now. :) Report Review
This is so amazingly well-written. Cho's not one of my favorite characters, but I love your writing style and voice in this piece. :)
envinyata.Author's Response: oh wow! thank you so much! that review just made me ridiculously happy. :)
and actually.it's not cho talking. it's a cedric/oc piece, but i know i didn't make that clear. you'll see. x) Report Review
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