HAHAHAHA! I absolutely loved it! Report Review
Loved it!! So so funny, the people arround me must think I'm crazy :D Report Review
i liked that
it was pretty funny
i wish i saw how bill reacted though Report Review
WRITE MORE NOW! Please...? Report Review
Yes. I do love Teddy.
This was really funny! Good job! Report Review
Yes, very cute one-shot. Thanks for sharing it! Write more stuff, please. Report Review
Oh dear, do any of the wotter men have any sense what so ever?
I luuurved him!!! He is amazing :)
-Kayla Report Review
Hahaha I absolutely loved the part where Teddy was having fun under Vic's bed and he decided to lick her ankle. Good stuff, am going to fave :D Report Review
Hahahahaha! Love it so, so much! Awesome work! Report Review
Good but, BORING. Work on it. You have a good plot:) Report Review
oh god!!! AMAZING!!! Report Review
I LOVE THIS !!! you wrote the characters perfectly. i really wish you make a series out of this! it's amazing!! Report Review
I loved this!!! Enjoyed it immensely!! Great JOB!!! Report Review
So cute! Loved it. Oh Teddy. Report Review
That was sooo good! i didnt want it to end. That would be a MAD story!!! I LOVED IT! Report Review
Well she's a bit violent but I like it. You kinda left us hangin' tho'. I feel like I need to know more. Did they break up? Did Bill do him some bodily harm? Did she go back and declare her love for Teddy to Bill? Does she love him or was this just a booty call? :) Just so many questions. Report Review
Victoire is a gem. I adore her. Teddy, oh dear T. R. Lupin, what a complete and utter prat. I, naturally, adore him as well. Poor Bill, I hope he doesn't have a heart attack or something... I can totally understand his speechlessness. I can also understand Victoire's murderess inclinations. I love that he practically completely shameless. How hold is Victoire here? She's of-age naturally, but is she 19 or something...? Gah. That was quite funny. Ted is an absolute star.Author's Response: You know, you're actually the first to ask me about details to the story :) When I first wrote it, Teddy was deeper, and actually had a conscience ... but then I decided I liked idiot-Teddy more :) Victoire is only 17 -- this would have taken place around 2 months after her last year at Hogwarts.
Thank you! Report Review
i just read in one of your review responses that you wanted a banner - can i please make you one? it'd be my first HPFF banner but i'm generally okay at that sort if thing...
reply to my review below with an e-mail address if u'd like one, so i can send it to u
10/10 rating againAuthor's Response: Aggh, I'm really sorry -- but I already got a banner for this one, and it would be a long and arduous process to take it off :(
But how about a banner for my new story? It's called Woe, but it's darker and more angsty than this one... is it possible to PM here? I can PM you my email, along with details to the story.. Report Review
i love it.
that's all i have to say.
unless you want to be the best author on this site and write some more for me? *puppy dog eyes*
on second thoughts... maybe you already have... i'll go check... if you havnt then i'll go cry (a.k.a revise)Author's Response: Thank you!
Unfortunately, though, this was my first story -- I've started "Woe", but the first chapter is still in validation :)
This was really awesome though, thank you again :) Report Review
i luv victoire!!!
i have become pretty obsessed with her.
teddy rox my sox.
-cocoAuthor's Response: I love Teddy and Victoire too :)
I wanted to go into Teddy's head a bit more... I might do that in the following story.
Thank you! Report Review
That was hilarious! I loved every moment of it! COme up with more of such strokes of GENIUS!
~emmaAuthor's Response: Lol, thanks!
I'll probably do a sequel to this, though :)
Hilarious and cheeky, made me laugh
Very cheeky Teddy
Great read =]Author's Response: Thanks!
That was what I was aiming for. I'm glad I got that response :D Report Review
I had a lot of laughs reading this. I am always looking for a fantastic fan fiction for Teddy and Victoire but because it is so new they are hard to find. Keep writing!Author's Response: That's about the greatest thing you could say to me, thank you!
Lol, and I do plan to continue writing :) Report Review
Oh that was interesting! I would love to see a follow up on what happened after, like the rest of Bill's reaction or something. Regardless, great job!Author's Response: Thank you :)
Considering the reactions to this fic, I am contemplating writing a short story follow up afterwards. Reviewer #1, that means plenty! Report Review
haha that was so funny! love it! write more!Author's Response: I am looking forward to writing more :) But, first fic, I was slightly hesitant as to the responses.
Thanks! Report Review
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