i liked this a lot, i really did. my onlyy complaint would be the whole cutting off his rant with a kiss. It seems so cliche now. Otherwise, I heart this side of Scorpius. I really liked the line, "Scorpius grinned as he leaned down to press a quick kiss to her shocked lips." It was so sweet, and the way you wrote this entire story was just lovely. I liked how it felt so natural for Scorpius to feel this way about Rose (worried, loving, etc.) and how Rose loved it and felt the same way about him. Sucha sweet story(: Report Review
Ah I loved this I wanted more when I got the end It was written really well and I love your Rose and Scorpius There is nothing like a bit of fluff! =] Great one shot spam_up_sam x Report Review
good one-shot, kinda short, but it was good. Rose/Scorpius is one of my favorite pairings, you wrote it well. Report Review
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