{reviewid: 500281, reviewer: 'raylees'}
14th May 2005:
This was okay but,can you please make yur chaps a little longer?Why dope Freya think Hermione is mean?Who is Freyas mother?How'd Herm an' Ron get 2gether?:)
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{reviewid: 126241, reviewer: 'Kuja%27s_Girl'}
2nd April 2004:
Verry well done i love it Freya is Awsome!!!!!!!! she reminds me of some one form a video game. N.E ways Love the story update soon!
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{reviewid: 124162, reviewer: 'Yiva%20Potter'}
29th March 2004:
I love it upate It SOON!
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{reviewid: 121165, reviewer: 'Shikaka'}
23rd March 2004:
who is her real mother??? this is sooo good! email me soon. i need to talk to you about *Gemini*
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{reviewid: 119664, reviewer: 'LNenny'}
20th March 2004:
that was pretty good, I'll say. I think you showed Freya's emotions well,and hey, who wouldn't want to spend time with fred and george? I wish Hermione wasn't so mean. Oh well..
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{reviewid: 119660, reviewer: 'Theresa'}
20th March 2004:
It's very good, you should definitely try and finish it but you might want to work on the spelling and grammar!
happy trails
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{reviewid: 113493, reviewer: 'Shibby'}
| Review #7, by Shibby | Intro |
7th March 2004:
WRITE MORE SOON PLEAZ!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!! IT@S STATRING GOOD!
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{reviewid: 110849, reviewer: 'Paige'}
| Review #8, by Paige | Intro |
29th February 2004:
Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Soon!!!!!! P.s.hfr!!
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{reviewid: 110558, reviewer: 'Chukler'}
28th February 2004:
You might want to consider a beta reader. Also, you might want to consider pre-writing techniques and making your chapter longer.. it helps your writing a lot by planning it out
Author's Response: well thankx for the info but...... i know what i'm doing i already planned out the story and thats just the intro!!!!!!!!
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