Oh I just fell in love with this story! I cant wait to see what happens next. Good job on creating such a great group of characters. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Great! :) And thanks about the characters. Hopefully updating soon.

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This is actually funny! The two of them actually married. I hope this works out well (as in the parents freak out) ;-).

I find the emotions believable. I also believe the panic at the thought of them being married. Where did you come up with this idea...I love it. Actually, I hope Luna thinks it's cute; that would be so perfect.

I like the detail and the pace of the chapter. You did a nice job on it.

Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Haha thanks. I don't even remember where I got the idea, I think it just came to me one day. That sounds lame, but it's true :)

Thanks again!

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OMG this story is sooo bloody AWeSOME!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Haha thank you very much

Soon :)

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very original and interesting start!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

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ok, this is an interesting little chapter. I can't wait until they get caught.

Nicely written

Author's Response: Thanks very much :)

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Quite funny. I can believe that a daughter of Luna would react that way about the story of the Snorkacks. Her daughter is nicely portrayed in this chapter. Just the right amount of detail to it as well

Nicely done

Author's Response: Thanks! Haha if I was a Lovegood child I would hate my life, so I just transposed that into an actual plot. Woo!

Thanks again :D

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Me likes.
I like how it seems realistic. Cool stuff.

Author's Response: Gracias.
Thanks, I think Lenny is pretty relatble.
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i really like it so far...good job. i hope you continue with it because i would lovvveee to see the relationship between Lenny and James progress...if that is actually where you are taking this lol. and your also pretty dam funny.

Author's Response: Thanks :D
I will continue, and there's no promise, hehe. Wow, thanks, I appreciate that. I am glad you think so!
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Lovely beginning and I hope you do continue the story (and have longer chapters). Lenny is funny and likable. It's easy to relate to her because who hasn't been embarrassed by their parents? As much as you may love Luna, it'd be hell to be her kid if you were normal. Poor, poor Lenny.

Author's Response: I will continue, and the chapters will get a lot longer, this is just a beginning.
Yeah, she's a very relatable person I think, because in some way everybody's mom is crazy.
Thanks!
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ah, poor lenny! must be hard to enjoy luna when you're pretty darn normal, huh? either way, i think this story's pretty funny. you're gonna keep writing right?
oh yeah, and i love luna's outfit--it sounds just like her!

Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I plan to continue writing.
I was inspired by (believe it or not) my own robe. Guess I'm a psycho :)

Thanks again
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