So cute! I absolutely LOVE this story! Keep writing please! I love how you've done Al's character. The Rose/Scorpius miniromance certainly difn't turn me away either! Love love love it! Report Review
I loved that last bit.
"So I strutted... In a very manly way. Because I'm a man"
Your writing is quite funny :) Report Review
awh! this is an adorable story:) Report Review
I really like your story! Please update! Report Review
I LOVED it. I just seem to love Al/OC stories and this one is pretty good. I'm excited for what you have in store for this story. Report Review
Great story so far...can't wait to read more...I'll leave a better review when I finish what you have so far! Report Review
good story! I like how you have a clear idea of all of the characters, and the plot is advancing well. keep it up! Report Review
awesome but totally random, you kind of just lurched into it. But please write more- im already stuck to the plot! : D Report Review
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