{reviewid: 954216, reviewer: 'holly%20bergman'}
29th March 2006:
Your chapter are a little short and I think you can write a little more detail. You may also want to fix up your grammer and spelling. I like your story so far.
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{reviewid: 954156, reviewer: 'Sarah'}
29th March 2006:
I like your story but maybe you could add more to it. It's a little bit dull.
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{reviewid: 519828, reviewer: 'watchingyou247'}
29th May 2005:
ok this story waas ok........... i guess
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{reviewid: 519824, reviewer: 'watchingyou247'}
29th May 2005:
short ok i guess
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{reviewid: 519821, reviewer: 'watchingyou247'}
29th May 2005:
WHY ARE YOUR CHAPTERS SO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol i like it
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{reviewid: 519817, reviewer: 'watchingyou247'}
29th May 2005:
ok that was really short and yes you spelled it wrong its review
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{reviewid: 519809, reviewer: 'watchingyou247'}
29th May 2005:
ok that was really short but still good!
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{reviewid: 519806, reviewer: 'watchingyou247'}
29th May 2005:
TO MANY SPACES!!!!!!
lol jk i like your story so far !
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{reviewid: 126023, reviewer: 'HELENz'}
2nd April 2004:
Your story is pretty cool!!!
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{reviewid: 59269, reviewer: 'LindaSnape'}
5th August 2003:
Very interesting story. It\'s kinda weird, but I like it.
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{reviewid: 57458, reviewer: 'Padfoot'}
31st July 2003:
write more thats really good, you really are writing in the style of j.k but you didn\'t kill him, ggggggggggggggggggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*GETS AXE AND STARTS SEARCHING EVERY POSSIBLE PLACE*
cassie
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