this is amazing
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I love it!
But where's the other two girls? Cissy and Abi? You need to update, lady! (:
Hoping to read more,
Bells. Report Review
WOW; captivating story. I really love how you write the characters, their thoughts and emotions. And Lily not as the not too little miss perfect. Great story! Report Review
What a bitch... I'm not so sure the Jane girl was all that great. My guess is she's a ghost?!?
Anyways, great chapter. Post more soon! Report Review
Ahhh, I was NOT expecting that!!
This is getting good... your story line is amazing Report Review
Wow, that was different... but different in a good way. There's not really much I can say except I can't wait to see what happens :P Report Review
whoa... starting to really hate jane, no matter what happened to her, what she's doing is kind of inexcusable... and poor georgie! can't wait for the next chapter, and looking forward to the next lily chapter :) i know it's early but i'm kind of hoping she'll break up with sirius... meh, a girl can wish xD Report Review
omg! i am a fan of the story but i am NOT a fan of sirius/lily, maybe i didn't pay enough attention looking at the couplings of this story... did you put them in? i know some people like it but i find them as a couple so offputting!
anyway i don't mean to be too critical, it's just that sirius and lily together kind of make me want to vomit :)
good chapter though, and the note was very ominous and creepy. on to the next one... :p Report Review
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This is so good so far.
Can't wait for an update. Report Review
wow. i really like it please post more soon. it's really good. Report Review
your story is one of the best i have ever read... (and this after 2 chapters!)
it is very exiting, and i also like the idea of lily, narcissa and the other girls have been once best friends and now having problems because of the perfect jane
and sirius and lily - together? that was a surprise, lily belongs normaly to james, but i like the idea; it is different than other fanfictions
"Only one person knew her secret." Well, how could jane know about sirius and lily, she was "dead" before they went to school , wasn't she?
Please update soon i'm addicted of your story :D:D
(sorry for my bad english, but i just want to say, that i like your story!) Report Review
Ok, I have to be honest I was a little upset by the whole Sirius and Lily thing I just don't like them together or anything but I did like the rest and of course the letter at the very end totally got me hooked on the story!!! Report Review
did u get this from pretty little lairs?
i love that book! Report Review
This sounds totally COOL!!! It's totally got me on the edge of my chair!!! It's like totally making me nervous and excited! I am super duper excited for the rest! It's totally awesome and it gives me chills! HAHA Report Review
This kind of reminds me of the movie IN CROWD! Like the story line isn't the same but it's got that same creepy, scary, huge anticipation feel to it! And I like that!
So like I am assuming that the girls all did something bad and told Jane about them and then they did something to make Jane mad so now she is going to follow through hogwarts and blackmail them! Which is totally creepy but it's got me completely hooked! And Jane or I am assuming it's Jane just cuz of the Love, J. part at the end well whoever it is sounds kinda mean!
But I want this story to keep going so please continue and I am excited for the next chapter! Report Review
This is great, keep up the great work and you better keep this story going! Report Review
Wow! This sounds awesome! I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter!! You did an amazing job! I am totally hooked on this story! Report Review
i like it a lot please continue soon Report Review
I guess I'm wearing a very puzzled look at the moment. Cos with that there's appreciation that I really like your prologue of the story. I'm very curious how the story will wove around Lily. Very spooky... to spooky to really think about.
By the way Update Soon! Can't wait to read more! Report Review
ohoo!! sounds good! update soon! Report Review
Woa! Intense!! Like camping you know "in" "tents"!!
Haha I know lame joke but I love it its funny!!
Ok but serioulsy I was a little creeped out when i read the summary but when I was reading the actual story I wasn't creeped out but then at the very end the last paragraph I was like WOA! Frickin' creepy!! Anyway I am so full of suspense congrats you are an amazerin' author cuz I'm like-
"I need the next chapter now I am full of that much suspense!!"
I am wondering about Lindsay it confuses me actually a lot of the story confuses me but I am looking forward to figuring it out so please don't leave me hanging!
CONTINUE WITH THE STORY!!! DON'T YOU DARE ABANDON THIS ONE! OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN-ok I prolly won't hunt you down cuz if you can write such a creepily suspenseful story you might scare me in real life so i won't hunt you down but PLEASE DO FINISH THIS!!! Report Review
Such A Kl Story
I'm All Excited Now
Bring On The Next Chapter Report Review
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